First time posting, ever, and I'm already asking for help. Anywho, is there anybody that could possibly read over my stories? At the moment it's not for the site, although it might be since I can think of a continuation from it, but it's for my class and there are better writers here than in my class. I really want to get a second opinion on it, so please help me! I'll love you forever and be indebt to you!