So here it goes, I'm planning to write a new story and I don't know if it's good enough..

And also the font, I don't know if it's too small for reader's.

Anyway, just read it if you like I'm not forching you hihihi. It's about Kai, btw.

So, here are some bits or maybe the foreword and description itself.

Tell me if it's good guys, huh? You guise are my crituque for now :DD

There is two things that possibly meant if your heart is in a freeze. It may be a positive or negative.

It may be because a certain person's entire life was caged up in darkness and enmity that the person is almost blind to see the beauty of the world hence that person's heart was still in a freeze and couldn't be melt.

Or it may be because there is one person that actually make your heart tremble and freeze that you can no longer recognize things surrounding you and was as if all was in a blur concentrating only to the person who made your heart freeze for a second.

What could possibly the path they may take within these choices? Or will it be just another way around?

The quantum of Kai's life was pent up in darkness.

He doesn't trust anyone(only he gives his trust to his friends).

He hates people who might be the one who might help him to get away with this darkness. 

And he thinks that his life was all ruined.

Was still there a chance for him to flee from this darkness? Or will someone catch him for him to be finally be able to break loose from the threads of his own existing darkness?

Btw, it's just the foreword and description itself. So how is it guys? Is it good or will I have to change the font? Thanks by the way :DD Comment on the comment box for the feedback :DD