Title (5/5)

I loved the title! It was sort of like a spinoff to the over-used title ‘Less Than Perfect.’

Description/Foreword (4/5)

I liked the description, but in my opinion, it gave a bit too much away. Besides that, both the Foreword and Description were fine to me.

Grammar/Spelling (14/15)

Your grammar and spelling were fine. Typos here and there, but typos always happen. Yeah…typos are annoying =n=

Plot (13/15)

It’s a twist to the ‘perfect girl’ type of stories. I like it! Because there are only two chapters, the story still has a lot of elaborating to do.

Characterization (10/15)

Characterization is fine so far in the story. Keep it up!

Emotion (10/20)

There hasn’t been any drama so far, so I’ll just leave it at that.

Flow (5/5)

Your flow is fine at the moment. Make sure it stays that way and keep it interesting for readers! ^^

Poster/Background (5/5)  

I absolutely adore your poster. It’s just so nice, though there could’ve been a better picture used for Daehyun.

Font/Spacing/Appropriate Paragraphing (4/5)

Font = fine.
Spacing = fine.
Appropriate paragraphing = not so much.  
PUT PARAGRAPHS! I CANNOT EXPRESS THAT TO YOU ANY MORE, MAN! PARAGRAPHS!

Thoughts:

I really like it so far :) I finally found a good story with FTIsland in it!

Overall enjoyment (8/10)

I’ll subscribe ^^

Received points: 78/100