Title (5/5)

-It's a really nice catchy title: Blooming Blossom. Although it is hard to say.

Description/Foreword (5/5)

- The description is good, you explained who Yeong Hyeon was and what she was going through and that she was giving life a second chance so it was well done 5/5.

Grammar/Spelling (13/15)

-There were a few Spelling mistakes so I would advise you to use spell check and proof read your chapters before you upload them but other then that your writing is good and you use perfect punctuation.

Plot (12/15)

-It sounds interesting, I can't really say since there's only 1 chapter (hence why I can't give you a full 15) but it's interesting so far.

Characterization (10/15)

- I can't give you a high mark because there is only 1 chapter so we really don't know anything about them except that Yeong Hyeon is depressed and Jiyoung isn't good at dancing.

Emotion (15/20)

-AGAIN ONLY 1 CHAPTER!!!! But seriously I can already tell this is going to be a very emotional story.

Flow (5/5)

-1 chapter so I'll give you 5 for it so far.

Poster/Background (5/5)

-The pictures you used were nice but you don't really have a poster or anything I think you should get one but it's really up to you.

Font/Spacing/Appropriate Paragraphing (5/5)

-Your paragraphs are evenly spaced, not too long, not too short. Perfect. And the Font you used is really nice.

Thoughts

-Don't change a thing.

Overall enjoyment (10/10)

-IT'S AMAZING I LOVE IT!!!!! Update soon, you're fantastic at writing.

Received points: 80/100