Question about my writing..

DO YOU THINK I SHOULD START WRITING AGAIN?

hey guize.. i was thinking about starting to write again, but i'm not sure because i think i will just get hate messages again..

so, honestly, do you think i should? i'm thinking of a plot, and characters. probably an EXO fic. ... 

what i'm about to give you is a sneak peek of what my first chapter, and my writing is like. this fic is going to be

about a girl ( you ) and Baekhyun. NOTE: i didn't steal anything, honestly its just what i came up with. so if its similar, tell me.

BTW. ur name is going to be "Jirae" and also note: when people are speaking. its in italics

 

SNEAK PEEK:

It was a normal day at school, around lunch time, and I was sitting at a table with my best friend EunAh. You see, EunAh and I have been friends since we were in elementary school. Sure we had a couple of issues and fights, but they're all over now. She is the type of friend that is like your sister, someone that can be there for you to lean on, a person to tell your secrets to, and also the love "guru". EunAh can ALWAYS tell if someone is falling in love, or when someone is in love. Amazing right? So, anyways, when we were sitting at the lunch table in the fairly large school cafeteria, a sudden silence occured. Usually, silence meant the kingkas or queenkas were here, or there was a new student. We turned around swiftly only for our eyes to be greeted by a door closing. EunAh looked at me, and slowly said, "Jirae.. if theres nobody there.. and a door closed.. you know what that means.."  My eyes widened at what she said and we both screamed in unison "GHOOOOOOOOOOOSTTTTTTT!!!!!!!!!!!! OMIGOSH HELP!!!!!!!" About 15 seconds later both heard footsteps behind us. EunAh and I made eye-contact and whispered, "It's right behind us......." Soon to be touched by an unknown prescence, and what I thought was a ghost. I turned around, only for my eyes to see a handsome male. "My name is Baekhyun.", he said. "I was the one who opened the door, and those footsteps you heard were mine.", he chuckled and smiled gently at me. "So what's you and your friend's names?", he asked. "My name is Jirae. My friend's name is EunAh.", I said cheerfully. "It's nice to meet you Baekhyun-ssi~!", EunAh and I said in unison. "May I sit with you two?", he tilted his head slightly, and asked. "Sure, anytime.", I replied respectfully.

 

How was it ?? ><

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BrideDeJunpeiMi
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/awkwardly claps/