I am going to start reworking Miles Away, because honestly, I have a plot for it, but it's taking too long to write, so I'm cutting out Crystal's  POV...so chapters 1,3,5,7,9...are going bye-bye. Also, I am going to end it then start a sequel...I have been working out three different 'books'. I will write in MInho's POV for the first installment, Crystal's POV in the second installment, and third person pov for the final part. I also need to add more history about the characters. I can see why this story isn't very popular because I wrote it for myself. So I'm going to put a more realistic character in...even though the character is much like myself...(I can sing, and I can dance) I am going to put a  more realistic spin on things like not have everyone like me, or have more angry outbursts like I do.

I am hoping to improve as a writer. I put this story up for review and I saw a lot of the same things the reviewer did that was wrong with this story, and I still put it up. Obviously its not as solid as Vampires Don't Exist. It doesn't have as many views either. So I think this rework is needed. It will challenge me as a writer and I will gain experience for it.