Title: [ 4/ 5 ]

If I’m honest, I perhaps wouldn’t have clicked on this story. But I’m biased, because I don’t really read these fics with the characters you have. But the title seems very interesting, and yes, it does relate to the story. But with the little bit of story you give, it seems interesting so yes, I would have clicked (most likely!).

Foreword & Description: [9 / 10 ]

Can I just say how much I LOVE this foreword? You don’t give too much away, but at the same time it gives enough information to make me want to read and subscribe to this story. It may seem petty, but I’m giving you 9 because you repeat part of your foreword in your description, and that annoys me. But I guess you wanted to let people see a little bit of the story before you ‘click’ so that works. And no character lists! Awesome ;)

Plot: [ 18/ 20 ]

I like this plot. It’s original and funny, and I think you’ve put a funny twist on a story that’s been used a couple of times, I bet, although I haven’t seen many like this. I like the idea of a Mickey Mouse keychain that he holds when she’s lost or upset, and the two characters she has to choose between are different, you write her indecision very well!

Entertainment: [19 / 20 ]

I enjoyed this story very much. The way you portray the characters is really good. Just by reading your story I can imagine in my head (like a movie) whats happening and only really good fics can do that to me. I laughed at some bits, but when she lost Chunnie I felt really upset for her. The way you write is good.

Ending / The last chapter I read: [10/ 10 ]

Your story isn’t finished yet, I can see, but its really good. It left me wondering – is Junna going to break up with Changmin and stay with Yoonchun, or stay with Changmin and break up with Yoonchun? I also felt sad that her friend was gone – it left me wondering what would happen to their relationship. Would they stay in contact? Would they break friends?

Reviewer's Comments:

How has this story only got 330 views!? This is a good story, and I will be subscribing (actually, I think I already have xD) and recommending it to my friends (they don’t know DBSK, but I’m sure they’ll want to), and hopefully you can get more subs and views!

Total: [60/65]

Overall, I enjoyed this story a lot, and I want to know more about what happens to Junna. Because I don't know much about DBSK, it confused me in some parts with the characters, but I soon caught on and you've inspired me to look at some DBSK fics, something I wouldn't normally do!

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