Lockets


There's a locket for every secret she keeps away, 
Hanging loosely on the wall.
Don't let the appearance deceive you;
No one knows what lurks inside them all.
It might frighten you
It could enlighten you
You'll never know
Unless she opens up them herself. 
 
When she does, don't tell a soul
About the secrets of the worn-down lockets
Or she'll find you a fool.
 
Don't go pestering her about what's inside 
She'll ignore your burning curiosity.
She'll hide her lockets 
She won't speak to you
She'll erase herself 
She'll simply disappear out of your sight.
 
So be patient
There's a possibility that she'll show you
All the secrets locked away in her heart.   
 
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Another poem, but not creepy this time
Feedback welcome ^^
 
 
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tah_dah_kpop #1
You may say it's not creepy but it's still a little creepy....also I wish I was good at poetry >.<
Park_HyeSun #2
Ah. This is interesting.

Can you like, teach me the basics of making poems or something. I don't intend to make rhyming ones but I still find myself baffled when I attempt to try writing a poem.
ghibliesque #3
this is a nice poem but be careful with the words you use in the first stanza. I dont think they really mean what you want to describe.

(and 'deceive' not 'decisive')


and my favourite part: <33

No one knows what lurks inside them all.
It might frighten you
It could enlighten you
You'll never know
Unless she opens up them herself.
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