Dear Friends, Readers and Random People..

Dear Friends, Readers or Random People..

I don't know if anyone know about this, but I have a ongoing story. And, now i have a favor to ask..

I requested from a review shop but it think it's on hiatus. It's been, what, 2 months since I make that request? But I haven't gotten the review yet. So, I really don't know my level to story writing, what can be improve on, what is nice and what is not.. I feel so "Noob" in writing. But i like to write..

Point is, I want to improve in writing.. Sooo...

If you guys have any free time on hand, can you do me a favor by reading my story:

Click on the picture for the link!

And give me a feedback?

You'll be credited on the foreword!
And will also be loved! By Me! Hehehehe~

If anyone is interested to review, fill the form below and submit in the comment box.

Description & Foreword : [Score - / 20]
[What about the description/foreword is a turn on? What about the description/foreword is a turn off? Does it makes you want to find out more? Anything I could improve on? Any other comments?]

Characters : [Score - / 20]

[Is there too many characters that confused you? Is there anything comments about the characters? Is there anything you hope that the characters would be/not be? Is there any characters you find that is unnecessary? Other comments?]

Media (such as Poster, Graphics or Pictures) : [Score - / 10]

[Is it relevant? Is it attractive? What do you feel when you saw it? What do you think it tells you about the story? Does it bring any help? Do you prefer having it or not? Other comments?]

Flow : [Score - / 20]

[Is the writing style complicating and hard to follow along? Is the language easy to understand? Is it very often that there are mistakes? If so, such as? Is there any writing style of mine you find them good (such as descriptive, feelings, etc)? Is there anything you want me to improve on? Other Comments?]

Overall Enjoyment : [Score - / 30]

[Does the story interest you? Does it entertain you? Do you like it or not? What can improve? What is your feelings when you read? Is it engaging? Does it bore you? Does it makes you wanting for more, or makes you unsubscribe and leave? Is there any specific parts where you think is good, and is bad? Other Comments?]

Total Marks : [ - / 100]