Title (4/5)

I would say your title was pretty average in terms of creativity but it wasn't too bad because it did fully define your story, so well done for this component!(:

Description/ Foreword/ Prologue (3/5)

Your description summarized the whole plot without giving out too much details, which is commendable. It was short enough too but you didn't fully utilize the Foreword to let the readers have something like a sneak peak I deducted marks here.

Originality (8/10)

I have seen dozens of stories about proposals but, your plot was really creative! Good job here, you added your own special twist to the plot, making it a pretty successful romantic comedy story. I guess I don't have to elaborate any further right?(:

Story Flow (6/10)

The flow of the story was too slow at certain parts like the memories, and even though the Yunjae moments were cute but honestly, it slowed down the flow of your story and it was kind of redundant. But the flow of the story was generally fine otherwise.

Storyline / Characters ( 26/30)

The characters were almost vivid and each one of them had a clear and unique personality of their own so well done here author nim!(: However, there were a couple of story loop holes in your storyline so no full marks for you. But other than that, this component was great.

Clarity (2/5)

Your fonts, colour, etc was generally fine but I wouldn't recommend you to keep using caps or repeated letters to emphasize the exclamations.

E.g: "WHHAT?!?" Yunho and....
If possible, don't add the extra "H" and "?!?" is actually grammatically wrong.

Use words to describe it instead, it will be more smooth and professional.

Grammar/ Writing (12/20)

There were really a lot of grammatical errors here and there in your writing, a few spelling errors and a few wrong punctuations too, making some sentences awkward. Perhaps you can seek beta reading services from a beta reader? I'm only going to list some errors in your story not all otherwise it would be beta reading, I'm only supposed to evaluate your story.

#1.  [Original] The employee muttered under his breathe "I hate bulk buyers.."
       [Corrected] The employee muttered under his breath, "I hate bulk buyers..."

#2. [Original] They each went their seperate ways to go carry out their jobs.
       [Corrected] They each went their separate ways to go carry out their jobs.

I'm sorry if I'm too harsh for this segment. No hard feelings?

Bonus/ Comment (9/15)

I have to say you did a good job in portraying your characters' personalities, it totally fitted the romantic comedy genre of your story. Your poster and background was not bad but remember to credit the graphic request shop in your foreword or description because apparently you didn't.

Total (70/100)