Day 4: Jackie, Dear Friend

Jackie, Dear Friend

Jackie, Jackie

All day long I taste your kiss on the back of my throat

And I want more

Subtle hints of honey

And a never ending kick

Though nauseating you may seem

Substance over semblance

The whirlwind of colors you bring is never enough

The flashing red

Now blue?

When did that small group of people multiply by so much?

Spinning like a top

And I feel on top

But I had to fall, I had to

The colors are gone

Along with the rush

When the night has passed, I'm left with the sting of a thousand bees

Still I return to you

I need more

I'm just a girl and you, who is beyond my years, have me entranced

Oh Jackie, dear friend

Your Tennessee ways have charmed me completely

Our lewd affair is now set in stone

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Now I'm back on track! Of the four poems I've written so far, this one is my favorite! I'm sure someone knows what I'm talking about... Until next time!

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tillynilly #1 Jan 18, 2013 11:43:08

okay- i can see this meaning multiple things- though i'm not too sure which way you intended it to be read.
like, of course, it's probably talking about being infatuated with a girl and perhaps the things they do;
but i sort of also see this working with any kind of obsession- good or bad.
i wanted to comment right after you ha posted lol but i was tired and wasn't in the smartest mood. now that i reread i can kind of understand a little better (i hope).
i quite like this one too! good job, my friend! ^^