Day 2: Wishful Thinking

Wishful Thinking

 

Bells chime
The ocean mimics the sky
A deep blue blanket covered in diamonds
The wind pushes me to the water's edge
I let the waves leave small kisses on my bare feet
 
Longing for your presence near me
The sound of rain is all that keeps me company though it's not really there
 
In love with love was a love so true
As this silent night at sea takes over
Do you think of me, too?
 
Longing for your presence near me
The sound of rain is all that keeps me company though it's not really there
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Day 2! A much shorter poem. As you might've been able to tell, I like things to be repetitive. 
 

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tillynilly
#1
this poem is cute! i especially love the beach imagery and the line with all the "loves" in it. but idk i sorta feel like it didn't really connect as much to the wishful thinking part. so, yeah- in pieces i loved it but together.. not so much? sorry OTL i hope you dont mind
look see i am too annoying XP but yeah this was still pretty good, IMO. :)