Story Title: Little Miss Difficult
Author: minminXP
Genre(s): Romance, Comedy, Drama
Brief Description: The main character is Leeteuk's adopted little sister, Kim Hansol. She's not insensitive, she just chooses to ignore people's feelings, which are plain rude. She reacts differently to certain situations, which always stuns the people around her.

Since Hansol has a pretty complicated past, she likes to keep to herself, and she doesn't even divulge her past to Leeteuk.

When she receives a lead about her father, Hansol decides to search for him herself all while juggling her acting career.
Rated H: No
Reviewed By: EternalLove

1. Title: [5/5 pts.]
The title was cute and unique, but also sassy and unpredictable like the main character herself. I like it :)

2. Poster/Graphics/Background: [4/5 pts.]
I like the color scheme, but I question if it fits the story. Maybe a brighter color is better, but that being said, I like the ever changing graphics for each chapter. The main poster is lacking though. The two images are just that; two separate images. It's devided making me think there's two poster instead of one. I do however, like the top image of the girl. It fits the story.  

3. Foreword/Description: [9/10 pts.]
I love the forward. Its enticing and fun and sassy like the title and it gives a great incite into the character and her personality. The description could be a little more clearer to explain what she has to do with Super Junior. I get you don't wanna give away much though and the point is to hook the readers so I only deducted 1 point. 

4. Plot: [25/30 pts]
At first, I thought the plot was a little boring and cluttered. There's a lot to take in and too many characters for me, but when I read further, it was better understandable. You can connect with everyone better too. With a big group like super junior, it's a struggle to fit them in while maintaining consistent personalities and even if everyone isn't included all the time, I like their roles. There are funny moments and dramatic moments and moments that were just silly and the main character made it even better. There's a lot of elements in here that should be in a story. It's great.

5. Flow: [4/5 pts.]
The flow wasn't too fast or too slow. It progresses nicely from one scene to the next overall, but every now and then the story speeds up a bit. Try to keep the consistency of the story a bit better. Not much to complain though. Just don't rush the progression.

6. Characterization: [5/5 pts.]
I love the personality you gave to everyone. They seem so real to me. Also you didn't make the main character too sassy like I thought you were going to, which is good. Her personality seems more believable this way. I can also relate to her personality and habits which is good cause others might relate to it too making the story more enticing.

7. Grammar/Spelling: [18/20 pts.]
There aren't a lot of mistakes in this story and I'm happy about that since it makes the story easier to read. There are still the occasional grammar mistakes though, but Nothing that stands out too much overall. Be careful where you place your commas though and watch how long your sentences get. Too long of a sentence is a brainful.

8. Overall Enjoyment/Entertainment: [15/20 pts.]
I enjoyed this story. It's not the most exciting story, but it's enjoyable. It's more unique than what other stories offer, but some points, I find, are repeats of what other stories already tell. Not saying you copied it, but I found elements similar to what I already read before. It's still a unique story overall though, so it's a nice read. I could use a bit more drama though and maybe more romance? Just a little so as to not distract from the story plot.

Comments/Feedback: Pardon me, but the overall enjoyment section is where it's really difficult because my opinion comes more into play than all the other sections, so don't get offended if the score is drastically more different there. Or if I may be more harsh. Try not to misunderstand the criticism because this is a good story, but not really one of my tops since it just...lacks something. Maybe a bit of consistency since its a bit rushed here and there. It's a solid story altogether though so...keep writing :)

Total: [85/100]

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