A short Poem,... i came up with....

 

 

as i listen to some instrumental music of "Hear our Prayer" my mind drifts me to a thought of making imposible things possible. 

 

Floating in the air, feeling the breeze and clouds. smiling to the scenery, the scenery of freedom.

As you go on, you feel like you dont want to go back, like you want to stay forever in a place you see now, as freedom.

Cause as you look back into your life, all you see is sadness, pain, hurt and betrayal..but as you look to your front now all you see is happiness and freedom.

Being locked up in a dark cage, brings you nothing but darknes, but now floating in the air of freedom gives your heart the feeling of assurance and happiness.

So staying is the best thing for you, staying in the place of freedom, free from sadness, pain, hurt and betrayal.

like a white fox, running free from a hunter, like a bird flying happily whom escaped from a cage, like person whom is locked up from darkness and now smiling happily in front of the light.

Our place called freedom....

Hear Our Prayer ^-^

Fin~

 

 

So what do you guys think? sorry for another poem...just sharing my feeling from the music, seriously music is like an air that makes me free from my worries, hearing music makes my mind release such colorful and beautiful thoughts, hearing the music makes me calm and let my feeling's out...I am the type of person to keep my true feeling's inside, but with music i easily let it out and turned into something which im not sure if its creativity or just something ^-^ sorry for this...*bowed 90degrees* 

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#1
Wish i got such a skill. It was beautiful really <3
My_Melody
#2
woahhh~~~~ my saengie its beautiful~~ ^^
AzureOfKnight
#3
Whaa.. So beautiful Unni~ Thank you so much sharing such a wonderful poem. ^_^
_caxiAhtic_
#4
pusang gla, hnd q na tinapos, what the heck, unang linya pa lng parang nakakarelate na aq wtf XD anuh ba yan XD
haebaragi_clouds
#5
aaahhh mimi that's so beautiful
you are awesome mimi~~ ^^
thank you for sharing your sweet poem with us^^


good night mimi, have a nice and tight sleep
sweet dream...
god bless you always
*hug