Calling kimjaeyeon1243: Sweet Dream In Beautiful Nightmare
► Title: 2/5
Comment: It reminds me too much of a song I know that's called that.
► Characters: 3/5
Comment: The Characters are fine, though the YOU character is a little all over the place with her personality.
► Description and foreward: 25/25
Comment: The Description is really good and the Foreward is good with introducing the characters.
► Poster/Banner/BG/whatever: 10/10
Comment: Post is good. ^^
► Originality: 2/5
Comment: I've read a lot of fanfics with this type of scenario. No offense intended.
► Grammar: 3/10
Comment: I see a lot of grammar errors plus spelling. Though you did say your first language isn't English.
► Writing style: 4/10
Comment: It was a bit all over the place besides staying in one area for more then a little bit of time.
► Flow: 4/10
Comment: The story seems a little rushed to me. You'd be on one part then jump to a completely different place.
► Overall enjoyment: 11/20
► Bonus: 2/5
Comment for Bonus: Just for effort.
► Overall grade: 66/105
I assure you that I wasn't being harsh and am just grading this as a review. ^^ So, please no hard feelings.
~Kaza
I assure you that I wasn't being harsh and am just grading this as a review. ^^ So, please no hard feelings.
~Kaza
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