Fantasizing Review 2
Title: 5/5
Comment: It is quite intriguing as to why it is styled this way and it interest me to read the story. I also like how you kept the title short and simple.
Characters: 5/5
Comment: I love both of their characters and the way you express it seemed so realistic and detailed.
Description and foreward: 25/25
Comment: That's probably the most longest foreward I have ever laid eyes upon O_O (and no, I am deducting one point from because of that). I loved the details ^^
Poster/Banner/BG/whatever: 9/10
Comment: The only thing that bugged me was how the poster uses blue yet the characters are smiling, if it was a romance story then I would have preferred if you use a light shade of colour such as cream or light pink.
Originality: 4/5
Comment: There are many plots that uses dream as the main idea but even thought you use that idea, I do love the way you intrepret it in a different way!
Grammar: 9/10
Comment: Just make sure not to over-use the commas!
Writing style: 10/10
Comment: It is a style I normally would want to read from authors so I had no issues in this criteria.
Flow: 8/10
Comment: It was a little slow at first but grdually the pace got better and I love the flow of the ending.
Overall enjoyment: 17/20
Comment: I am not a great khuntoria fan however saying that; it still made me want to read on so great job for that!
Bonus: 4/5
Overall grade: 96/105
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