I Need Help.

Can someone please tell me if I'm doing something right or wrong with a chaptered fiction of mine? You know... Tell me if it's boring or whatever. And no I don't want it to be reviewed because some reviewers in AFF GRILLS and BURNS your writing style/grammar/concept until you cry.

So please. Help me? Please? PLEASE!? I really need another author/reader's point of view in this story since it's as serious and crucial as .

Please?

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SoulFighters123 #1 Aug 17, 2012 20:42:25

Unnie, I like your stories and I hardly ever see a single spelling mistake in them, I like how you use a wide range of plots to get all types or readers attention, I think it is really clever :D *hug* - p.s. If I see a spelling mistake in any of your stories when I read them, should I tell you? ^^

KannaNamu #2 Aug 17, 2012 13:48:12

Unnie, tell me what to read!!

kuro_usagi0730 #3 Aug 17, 2012 01:43:34

There's really nothing wrong with it, it's just some times I don't really like the idea of the story... Like 'The Calm' or 'Clutched By Sin', because the topic makes me uncomfortable that's why I don't read it, but also sometime I just don't like the plot so I don't read it. ._.