Calling on JazzyJazzmine!!! Review for Vampire Academy!
JazzyJazzmine- Vampire Academy
Story Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/219637/vampire-academy-2shin-drama-elvin-fantasy-romance-ukiss-vampire
Poster Link: http://sphotos.xx.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ash3/550816_110866132389798_411022230_n.jpg
► Title: 3/5
► Characters (Depends if they follow their roles completely): 4/5
► Description and foreward: 20/25
(The forward didn't talk about the story really. But don't worry)
► Poster/Banner/BG/whatever: 3/10
(It only looks like a regular picture from one of their twitters)
► Originality: 3/5
(I've seen this kind of story before)
► Grammar: 8/10
(It was just about perfect)
► Writing style: 9/10
(It was very good. Just needs a tiny bit more detail)
► Flow:10 /10
(I think that it flows pretty well, just don't jump the gun too quick.)
► Overall enjoyment: 18/20
► Bonus: 5/5
► Overall grade: 83/105
(I really enjoy it so far. I am just grading it, but I still see it as a good story. No hard feelings, I promise.)
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