Poster, banner and background: 10. I suggest for a romance poster, you don't to make it animated. You can go get a background too. Also, Kiseop's picture looks a bit weird o.O

Foreword and Description: 10. A description is about what the story is about. And by the way, I don't get it. The main girl is Michoung then later you say Micha. What?

Originality and Plot: 18. Original. The plot is okay, some few errors.

Grammar, spelling, spacings and correct use of punctuation marks: 25. It's okay. Only some few errors.

Flow: 7. Great job!

Audience Impact/Enjoyment: 6. Keep up the good work!

Overall: 76/100