Review for Sweet Injury

 

Title: Sweet Injury 5/5

The title was very unique. It sure did stand out to me. It catches the readers attention and stands out amongst the other stories.

Graphics/Posters 5/5 
Your poster was very good. I liked how you kept it simple. And they are matching! The one thing I must ask of you though.. For the background please change it.. The color throws off the poster scheme.
Foreword/Description 10/10 
The foreward was very good! I love how you have lines from the chapters. Although when you put ch6 you should put a prettier font. But the creativity of that was amazing!

The foreward was also very eye catching. If I was looking for a story to read I think I would click on yours. I love how you left us hanging and interested so we just had to click on it.

Originality 9/10 

I have seen stories similar to this. But I only took off one point since you did add your own touches to it. I hope you will continue to do that as it will make the readers much more sastified with the story.
Plot 20/20 
The plot was good. Once again you did add your own touches. I love how you twisted in the jealousy smoothly. Only very good authors can do that without throwing the story off so kudos to you! I could not wait to continue reading the story. Every chapter had me completely mesmorized.
Grammar/Spelling 29/30 
Your grammar and spelling overall was very good. I took off one point because I saw 1 or 2 word misspellings in the story but that was all.  I love reading stories with good grammar so thank you!
Flow 9/10
The very beginning had me interested. I really dislike slow beginnings so I love you for that.. I took off a point because the sudden changes in POV caught me off guard at first.
Neatness 5/5 
The spacing in your story was A-M-A-Z-I-N-G! I loved the way you didn't just make it one huge paragraph! Much love for that as I am neat with stories as well.
Extra 5/5 
This was my first time reading a OTP story. And even though I'm still not a fan of shipping this story was very good so far! So good job!
Total : 97/95 Points. 

Reviewed by : SHINeeElf15

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