Title: Fell in love with a MAID?! 4/5

I like the title. It gives you a hint, telling you what to expect in the story. Although I took off a point because I think you should add some capitalization. Like 'I Fell in Love with a MAID?!'.

Graphics/Posters 5/5 
I loved your poster. It was very attention grabbing and cute. I love the simplicity of it. Your background as well is very good. It is adorable, but not distracting.
Foreword/Description 8/10 
Your foreword was very good. I liked how you included a brief introduction of them. Although you did have some spelling errors. But I will correct those later. 

Your description was very interesting, it definently catches the reader's attention. But I took off two points because your author's note interrupted in the middle and kind of threw me off a bit.
Originality 7/10 
I have seen stories with similarity. Boy is rich, Girl is poor, Girl is boy's maid, Boy and Girl fall in love. But I feel as if your story did have a bit of it's own originality. I mean a person bring in a stranger is original.. probability..none at all, But original nontheless. 
Plot 17/20 
Once again I have seen stories with similar plots. But you did add in your own twists and turns that I enjoyed very much.  I love how you brought out the cutesy side of B.A.P, many stories do not do that. So good job.
Grammar/Spelling 19/30 
I was lenient with you as I know that it takes a lot to go out there and write in a different language. Let alone post the writing online.  I have to give you a thumbs up because that was brave of you. I did notice you do have a bit of a problem with past tense. For example if you were to say 'She kiss him before.' That would actually be 'She kissed  him before'. I've also noticed you have some trouble with pronouns. Most likely mistakes but I thought I should point it out. Perhaps you can get a suscriber to read over your chapters and fix the errors? Keep learning English, you are very good in it already.
Flow 10/10
In the beginning you immediatley caught my attention. I absoleutly hate slow beginnings so I had to give you a 10 out of 10!
Neatness 5/5 
You are very neat, and I loved that about your story. I loved the way you spaced your story, it was easy to read and not confusing at all. I really loved  the font as well, it wasn't blinding like some others.. 
Extra 5/5 
I wanted to give you extra points for taking that step in the English language and uploading a story! I really respect you for that.
Total : 70/95 Points. Overall the story was very good!

Reviewed by : SHINeeElf15