Browsing some of the stuff I wrote when I was 11...

I was browsing some stuff at FanFiction.net when I found my old account and the stories I wrote when I was 11 years old!! I'm 15 years old now, and looking at the stuff I wrote back then made me realize how much I've improved in writing... I was laughing while reading my old stories and I was like, "These people who subscribed and reviewed are the kindest people to even say that they liked my stories."

This one's from the anime section and I'll just insert an excerpt of the story (for laughing purposes LOL)

 

As Natsume walked by, he noticed a spark from the sky. He gazed upon the night sky to see where the spark was coming from. He saw a star shining brightly. As he was gazing upon it, he remembered the sad Mikan after.

"Mikan," He murmured.

Mikan happens to be walking by until she saw Ryosuke.

"Ryosuke," Mikan called. Ryosuke turned his head towards Mikan as she runs to him.

"Mikan it's you," Ryosuke says as he scratches his head and closes her eyes. He gave out a smile after, "I seem kind of lost. I don't know which way to turn here."

"Really, I thought Mr. Narumi assigned you to someone already." Mikan says.

"I don't know. I can't sleep though," Ryosuke said.

"Me neither," Mikan replied, "Let's stroll around the academy." Ryosuke nodded, as a sign of his reply. As they were walking, they were starting to create a conversation.

"So Ryosuke, you haven't told me about your alice. What is it?" Mikan asked.

"Actually Mr. Narumi told me that it's very strange." Ryosuke replied.

"Speaking of strange, I haven't seen you use your alice, so what was it?" Mikan asked.

"That's the thing. Mr. Narumi told me that it's a new alice. At childhood, it may not be visible but as I grow older I can feel it unlike the other way around. Plus, I also belong to the special ability type." Ryosuke answered.

"That's really weird. But I belong to the special ability class too. But really, what's your alice?" Mikan asked.

"My power is Invisibility. Kind of weird, isn't it?" Ryosuke answered.

"No; it doesn't matter if you are left out or something. What matters most is that you believe yourself. That alice of yours is rare, so don't treat it like its nothing." Mikan replied.

"Thank you, Mikan." Ryosuke said.

"What?" Mikan was confused.

"For cheering me up," Ryosuke says as Mikan smiled, "And for eating your chocolate cake before!" Ryosuke said as he ran from Mikan, laughing.

"So you were the one who ate my chocolate cake? Come back here Ryosuke! I'll kill you for that!" Mikan followed Ryosuke after. Soon, the miserable Mikan turned into a happy Mikan, laughing as she followed Ryosuke. Ryosuke stopped. He was standing in one corner panting until Mikan ran to him and attacked him – sort of like a friendly fight.

"You'll never escape this time. You owe me one chocolate cake!" Mikan was sitting on Ryosuke as the boy was lying down. They were laughing. Then they saw a shooting star.

"Look Ryosuke, a shooting star! Let's make a wish." Mikan says as she closes her eyes and sighed heavily. Ryosuke stood up, asking the Brunette.

"What's your wish, piggy-tales?" Ryosuke asked the brunette.

"Don't call me that anymore. Plus, if I tell you my wish, it won't come true." Mikan replied.

"Fine, I'll make a wish now and I won't tell you." Ryosuke said as he made a wish. Mikan finished wishing, and not so long as Ryosuke finished too.

"Let's go back, Ryosuke. I'm getting sleepy." Mikan said.

 

 

OK... that was embarrassing. I really at writing (well I still do, but some say I've managed to improve my writing somehow). :)) I never really liked reading books (I still don't now) but my point is that I think reading books would definitely help you in writing. XDD ALWAYS READ.

Anyway, since it's been quite a while since I updated "Masquerade", I'll put an excerpt here and you can compare my writing style before and after (LOL though I doubt it barely changed! XD) It's been a while and I thought that you're really annoyed at me because it's taking me years to finish the third chapter. x))) But anyway, I'm not yet done with the third chapter... about 75% done though. I owe you guys a lot and here's part of that apology.

 

 

Top bowed his head forward before walking to his right, towards the same bench where he once seated on together with the boy on his back, except throughout the time they were on that bench, the younger was unconscious, and he just sat there, guarding him out of duty. But he can't help but feel a hint of concern towards the fair-haired boy, whether it's because of his responsibility or as his servant.

 

“Tell me! I want to know who I really am—why I'm even existing in this world. You have to tell me!!”

 

Top remained silent, and upon reaching the bench, he helped the lad sit down before he was able to sit as well. With his back straight and his hands together, Top lowered his head, thinking of an appropriate answer to his young master. He's still a kid, and his untainted mind couldn't understand his purpose in this world at a very young age. However, he has already seen the cruelty of the world and he has learned to hold grudges towards people.

 

“I can't tell you... not now.” Top answered without facing Jiyong, who became irritated upon hearing him speak.

 

So... yeah. x)) HAHAHAHA. XDD

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OMG YOUR WRITING STYLE IS GOOD OKAY <3