Blurb rewrite, please vote!

Which blurb is better for “Kaiba’s e”?

 

Option A:

When CEO Seto Kaiba propositions Joan, she expects a one-night stand, but he and his brother keep coming back for more. Now the Kaiba brothers want an heir from her and will pay any price to get it. How do Joan’s husband and boyfriend feel about her new profession? More importantly, how do they handle public scrutiny?

 

Option B:

CEO Seto Kaiba visits his brother Mokuba's side venture in California and goes on a power trip, threatening to fire Mokuba's best employees and calling the art director's girlfriend a . Who will win the ultimate battle for control? Join the Kaiba brothers at the Silicon Valley Game Developers Summit to find out!

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Athena66
#1
I like both but option B is the actual story right? You think Joan can pleases both brothers..haha if its in real life It must be very crazy ideas..but I totally love your story and do whatever please you..I am all for it.
nayakaies
#2
Isnt B ur story?