In my latest chapter, I focus more on the plot structure. I use 3 acts structure, which are set-up, confrontation, and resolution. I also focus on the main characters arc. How to develop 'Chanmi' from being a bland fan who likes Haeju as how she thinks Haeju is becomes supporting Haeju with knowing all of her flaws. From dreamy to realistic. The most important things to be remembered are the story has to have the clear message, a clear characterization, and some clear transitions of the plot. Chanmi grows. Haeju also has an arc in this story, which is from doing anything as she wants into more considerate. In the end, it's not perfect yet but I think I've got the hang of it. Using the three-act structures is actually helping.

Next time, I wanna focus more on what words I should use in my story. It's sad, really sad that my fanfic uses a really simple and childish sentences to tell the story. Basic grammar. Makes it bland. It's a language barrier problem. I shall read other people's works more to improve my writings. I hope I can find a story that the english is easy enough to read but it still feels 'artsy'. Next time I shall focus on the vocabularies, how to descripting, and narrating the story beautifully. Sigh xD