Hi guys! So I recently started a bestfriend story (i know, i know, cliche) between two people and although the names and characters used arent kpop, I'll probably change it to a Kaisoo story when I'm done. But I wanted to know if my first chapter was good or not. so I'm looking for people to tell me what they think so far. I'm looking for people to tell me things like:

-does it flow right?

-are the characters believable in their ages or is it too dramatic?

-does it make you want to read more?

-is my grammar okay?

-were there any parts you were confused about?

-and lastly, did you enjoying reading it? 

If interested, comment below or message me directly! Thanks!