Changing description of my Jikook story (help?)

This story not my most popluar fanficton, it has over 1200 subscribers and my most popular one has four times more, but I love writing this Jikook one more than any story on this site. I'm putting a lot of effort in it and its the first story for which I got my self a beta reader.

Yesterday I was bored so I made like ten differnt posters for that story and with help of few people, we agree that this one is the best.

Anyway, now I'm thinking about changing the description.

This is the currently one:

Rich Officer Jeon likes to spoil and pamper his younger boyfriend

If you are reading the story and know about what it is, do you have any suggestions about the new description?

If you don't know, you can check it here:

Daddy's little Princess

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ToxicVixen #1 Mar 21, 2017 17:46:27

"Jungkook doesn't seem to mind all the stress he's getting from the job because as long as his baby is spoilt and happy, so is he." kind of thing or "Being rich has its perks and Jeon Jungkook will make sure that his baby will get every single hing he desired. When Jeon Jungkook says 'everything', he literally mean it"

lol im just writing stupidly hope it helps

ChimiyaT0T #2 Mar 19, 2017 09:46:05

Um maybe something like?
The hot loaded officer jeon obviously loves to spoil his little Mochi of a princess jimin. Like any other lovable boyfriend Jeon loved to spoil his princess, and jimin being daddy's little princess loves being spoilt by his daddy.