♡ 'the princess & the pauper' animated graphic - suggestions?

Yes, hello, it's me back at it again with, you guessed it, animated + vector (almost) graphics.

(Also Barbie lmao this is like the second Barbie inspired graphic I've made lmao)

So I'm experimenting (again), but it seems I can't stay away from animations T___T And vectors...

Also, I know the 'gif vectors' look weird bc I can't crop gifs frame by frame to save my life ahahaha

Anyways, I like it so far but I feel like there's something missing.

So I wanted to ask any suggestions for improvements XD

It's so low quality because of the gif settings T____T

Also, here's one without the sparkles (I feel like it would be annoying with it but I like too ahahhaa)

Side by side:

 

Suggestions so far:

by SheirynFiya: sparkles → snow/mist // butterflies + flowers blooming

 

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twosuns
#1
Oh man I was going through childhood memory lanes a while back by rewatching all these movies - I Disney marathoned and basically watched whatever that came to mind - and one of them was The Princess and The Pauper.
"I'm just like you, you're just like me. We take responsibility~"
Ah. The memories.

Great job btw :) However I feel like the little twirling ballerinas are a bit too harsh in colour in contrast to everything else on the poster. Maybe have them in lighter shades or shades that match the background?
yunasbowtie
#2
HEHE barbie :D
I love the sparkles and the twirling dancers gifs <3 and omg there's that shadow of the girl dancing it's so cool and pretty!!
HOW DO YOU DO VECTORS AGAIN?? I used Illustrator for the first time in a year and it had me struggling ahhh but I somehow managed to made a shape that looked like a demented bowtie but YOU SO GOOD KEEP IT UP :D
wonderful job and sparking the good old memories and gosh, this poster is just edging me to finish chapter one of nsab. :)
one thing I'd suggest is changing the dancers colors? idk, the red and blue look a bit too contrasting, if i would to say? i like pink haha :D
mizusora
#3
I really like this!
I honestly am so in love with the title! I think this is quite creative and satisfactory. I reaaallllyyy like this!
I would suggest having a proper color scheme and making sure you don't go off into colors that are outliers. I feel like the red and the blue are based on a concept, but it may reduce the amount of sophistication in your design. Maybe in the background you can make it less saturated and more of a peach color in order to let the red and blue stand out in a better way. I definitely like the one without the sparkles, but if you were to put sparkles, I would suggest using less and not having it as a gif. It may distract the viewer's eye when looking at your design. Always make sure you know where you want the viewer to look at the most and build around it. :)
I really like this and you have a ton of potential! I just wanted to give you a few tips. I am sorry if I sound like a meanie! Kick me if I do! XD
chariseuma
#4
the moment i saw this title my mind screamed bARBIE OTL u did good bby
SheirynFiya
#5
Maybe you could put some mist/snow instead of sparkles? And add butterflies and flowers blooming? Just a suggestion! They seem like they could fit well
wannakang #6
OH MY HOLY TAKE MY BREATHE AWAY-
ARE YOU KIDDING ME WHERE THE FREAK IS THE FLAW??????????

RUSELLE I HAVE THE FEELS I AM CURRENTLY STARING AT THE REAL, YES, THE NEXT BARBIE SERIES, BOOK COVER.
your animation can save the whole world...........

oh f