Please tell me what you think
Ok i wanted to get a few things right off the bat.... before i make another update to hitched.
I want the honest opinions from my readers on this one.
Do you think my plot is getting boring or lagging in any way?
Does my latest update seem weird to u wat with the kiss to cure the hiccups?
If u think so please tell me honestly.
But before that i wanted to explain the dynamics of the kiss...
The point here was not about the kiss at all. Its about the suddenness (? ) of the whole thing...
A sudden unwarranted action or a jerk could cure the hiccups like scaring a person or startling him in any way
Siwon's kiss ended up being a shock to his senses that his hiccups stopped suddenly.... this was the concept i wanted to achieve with it and not to solely sensationalise the kiss.....
And as for the plot n the premise they hav still got a day more until the shooting commenced so i thought of toning the pace down a notch or else i would have this story completed in a few more chapters n tat wud b super quick....
And plus the fangirling heart in me was pushing me to write that kiss scene... kekekeke
Also since this is fiction i thought of adding it purely for comic relief....
So far i had received positive views about the story but there s a possibility that some might not like it at all...
So those who think that please tell me so that i can make changes in the future... since i want everyone to love the story i need to know...
Thank u so much for all ur support!
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