tiys part 1 plot (spoilers?)
Okay so I'm about done Part 1 of Talking in Your Sleep but I dont want to finish writing this first section until I have a plan for part two but I'm just not sure what to do?
I know I had a lot of ideas before but I'm ridiculously disorganized and lost... all of them basically except for a few i have lying around my blog haha and like one document on my computer
anyways so here are the (messy) plot points for part one (if it's striked out I've already written it haha):
events
top misses date again w/ daesungdaesung hangs out w/ gd lotstop doesnt tell daesung he is going away for an entire monthdaesung moans out gd's name in his sleep (the seed in his mind has been planted)top leaves on tripdaesung and gd sleep next to each othertop stays up all night fretting over the idea of daesung cheating on himgd calls seunghyun crying out ing up and saying he's sorryseunghyun gets call. assumes it is confirmation that daesung is in fact ing gd. instead of asking daesung about it he just gets pissed off and doesn't try to contact him for the entire rest of the month.- daesung gets more and more hurt as seunghyun doesn't reply to anything or call him back once the entire month he is away. starts racking his mind looking for things he might have done wrong. can't find anything other than his occasional "nagging" as seunghyun calls it (read: asking him not to up his house and to contact him occasionally if he's not going to show up for predetermined plans).
- seunghyun returns from trip but doesn't tell daesung he's back.
- daesung doesn't see or hear from him until gd drags him out one night since he's been looking "glum" and they happen to run into Seunghyun and his art friends. (maybe gd drags him out to an art gallery since he promised his friends he'd drop by to his opening) - his friend could be friends with that huge artist guy (owner of gallery too) that top and his crew want to get in with but they can't. and so the huge artist guy is taken with daesung fairly quickly, just in a friendly way. he likes his demeanour and is a fan of his voice. so they chat and have similar humour and enjoy the evening. and the guy tells him if he ever needs anything, just come find him here. maybe daesung does him a favour by going and holding up part of a sculpture that started to tip over while he finds the artist to get him to repair it there. and ppl think daesung is part of the show and it becomes a hit piece.
- Daesung tenses up since he always feels extremely uncomfortable around seunghyun's group ever since he made a comment about some painting they were all raving about and unsuspecting when they'd asked him what he thought of it and he said it was (in kinder words), they'd been rather cold and judgemental of his person since then. Very pretentious. Treats him like a dumb gagman. Daesung occasionally thinks that's what Seunghyun thinks of him too since he never invites him out and along to art things with him like he did before.
So gd nd daesung are having a laugh and it's a good night and seungri comes too and he's drunk af and wearing sunglasses and daesung notes that as weird bc it's night but gd shrugs it off as fashion but ds still doesn't like it but he just has fun with it
and then daesung freezes as he looks across the room and sees Seunghyun and his crew entering the room and his heart hurts because clearly seunghyun has been back for a week and hasn't bothered to even see him once so daesung just shakily puts down his glass and goes, "I have to- I need to- I'm leaving? Now?" and just weaves his way around gd and seungri who try to get in his way and stop him and ask him what's wrong what's shaking him up like this but daesung just glances up really quickly and then turns around really quickly when seunghyun almost sees him and just goes "i'm going home." and gd and seungri follow where daesung's vision went and they see seunghyun and daesung takes it as his chance to run and seungri just goes after him and gd just glares at seunghyun across the room and decides to approach him
seunghyun is like "oh! jiyong! what are you doing here?"
gd like, "i was here with my friends. here to support my friend in the show."
top like, "oh yeah who were you here with?"
"well daesung for one."
and he says seungri too but top's ears are ringing and his clasp on his wine glass is way too much and his jaw locks because he used to bring daesung to art shows.
And now of course daesung and gd are going to art shows together because they're ing backstabbers ing each other behind his back.
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And that's all I have and now I feel so lost from my original idea of where this story was going I dont know where to send it andddddddddddddddddddd yeah
I don't know what I'm even asking for here haha
Should I just scrap it and use these ideas in some other fic? :/ idk
I don't ignore this I'm just desperately trying to organize my thoughs haha
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