Hi guys! I hope you don't mind a bit of shameless advertising. blushes

I wrote an English response to Sunggyu's The Answer (writing from a girl's point of view) and I hope you wouldn't mind giving it a listen and giving me feedback on how I can improve my writing (and singing too, if your ears are not bleeding yet hehh).

The whole idea is that the original is from the guy's point of view, asking his lover to return, not being able to move on without her and such, and I wrote from the lover's point of view (who is actually dead), asking him to move on. Remember Paradise MV? The story behind it..? Well the storyline is something like that except the mourning girl is Sunggyu and the guys become Sunggyu's dead lover.

https://soundcloud.com/efj-ify/efjresponse-the-answer-kim-1

Open up the link and the lyrics and storyline is in the description :)

This is a slightly softer version:

https://soundcloud.com/efj-ify/efjresponse-the-answer-kim

Thanks a bunch in advance!

love,
EFJ