HI guys Its meeeeeeee!!!!!!! plus new story (maybe)

hey everyone how have you been? I have been doing FANTASTIC!!! I am not officially coming back but I will be posting a story well I might post a new story. It's called When death comes around. I don't know if its good or not so I will be posting a small peice of it here and I want you guys to give me some feed back or something because my writing is ewww and yeah. But I really want to know what you guys have been up to it's boring not being able to come here on a regular basis but soon I can I hope!

here is the exerpt from the story.

The laughter of the men were  as loud and scary as an angry lions roar. It echoed around the building and around the terrified young boy/girl. The sounds of feet slamming against the ground resonates off the walls and down the halls. The harsh exhale and inhale of lungs that are burning with the desire of rest. The boy/girl ran and ran until he/she collapsed against the wall of no escape. The voices began to whisper next to her/his ear but there was no one in sight.

 

    “ What do we have here?”

“I finally found you my love.”

"there is no escape this time."

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demonofyourheart
#1
Welcome half-back since it's not official ;) Glad to kbow you're doing great.
It sounds interesting ^^. Wonder what genre it will turn out to be. Will it be chaptered or a oneshot?
Little thing: be careful with verb tense.

Have a great day :D
Take care!
zcrystalemerald
#2
sounds interesting :D
JammyJanJan
#3
I hope you're doing much better and you should totally keep writing ^^
chunjixbyungie
#4
Ooh seems interesting ~
Is it gonna be oc or pairing or what??


And hey, how have you been??