Hey everybody, tardiseater here!

I just got this new idea, let me tell ya about it.

So I'm in bed, it's 11 something at night

(yes I know I should be sleeping, but I tried and couldn't)

and I'm laying here just side my lamp table when this idea just hits,

( don't worry, not literally, hehe.)

So I get my earphones, listening to Daughter, and start writing.

And then I think to myself, 'hummmm, I could use this for the description for Sacrifices!'

So I kind of spazzed out over that idea for a little while.

Then I thought, 'but what if no one likes it?'

So go back to just laying there looking at the ceiling, and then I get hit with another idea.

Why not put the new description in a blog, and ask how it sounds. 

So here the new description for  my story 'Sacrifices'

Description:

Love, is a funny thing. It make people do the strangest of things. Love has no boundaries, and most importantly, love has no one face. Anyone, can fall in love; regardless of background, ethnicity, financial standing, and life circumstances. This can be comically true for Serenity Tate and Oh Sehun, both of which are slaves. They lived in a world where hybrids were looked down upon; thought to be the lower class in society. But amidst all that hatred and pain, the two tiger hybrids managed to fall for each other. However, something unexpected and strictly forbidden will happen to this sweet couple. Will Sehun and Serenity be able to handle the change, or will the couple have to make some heart breaking sacrifices? 

So do you think? Personally, I think it sounds mysterious,

(unlike the current description,)

and vague, not giving away the whole story,

(unlike the current description.)

Comment to let me know what you think, and don't forget to check out my story, ' Sacrifces'.

 

*makes those 'ooo' and 'ahhh' sound that cartoon ghosts make*

I might change a few things in the story, I'm not sure.

Goodnight,morning, or afternoon!

(Just to cover every time frame. hehehe)