✧ Luminous Music Entertainment ✧ RIN

      rin   the unexpected snowflake

 NAME : dareen christabel

 BIRTHDAY : 02.12.98

 AGE : 16 y.o

 BLOODTYPE : o

 LANGUAGES : korean, english, japanese, chinese, indonesian

 


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birth   of    a    star  because everyone is a star waiting to shine

 FANCLUB NAME : snowflakes

 FANCLUB COLOR : #66cccc

 VOCAL RANGE : d3-g5

 DESIRED POSITION : rapper & vocalist

 HARMONIZE : yes

 AUDITION CLIPS : xxx

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shine  bright  like  a  diamond   inner beauty makes a person glow

 LIKES
— " fixing things " - her true talent is fixing things. whether its the light bulb, the sink, someones phone or watch. people would drop her jaws everytime they see her doing her magic
— " technologies and music " - she's interested in technologies and music and she would love majoring in music technology
— " the color blue " - she's obsessed for the color blue. you should look at her belongings and would go dizzy looking at the amount of blues
— " eating " - she loves eating and she wouldn't get fat. and she loves sweet things as well
— " skinship and aegyo " - skinships and aegyos are her forte. she absolutely loves it. although she's not too fond of people initiating the skinship

 DISLIKES
— " drawing " - she can't draw to save her life
— " heavy metal songs " - she absolutely hates heavy metal and would go crazy if she hears it
— " chewy, rubbery or too spicy foods " - she has a sensitive tongue that would go ballistic whenever those type of foods touches
— " bad hair day and wardrobe malfunction " - those following occurence just makes her day ugly. it's every girl's pet peeves
— " heavy makeup " - her face isn't the type to look more pretty using makeups. she prefers those light and subtle makeups that doesn't make her look like a drag queen

 TRIVIA
— " yeah i'm left-handed please don't look at me like that " - she's a lefthanded
— " i'm not that smart " - she's a straight a student, although she's not someone to brag about this and would hide this fact
— " oh, me religion is christian " - she's a devoted christian
— " sometimes i feel like my bones are too flexible " - she's secretly flexible
— " don't look at me like i'm crazy, my hands have a mind on its own! " - she's a gesture kind of person and would unconsciously move her hands to accentuate her words
— " why should i change the way i look? " - she never had plastic surgery
— " oh my goodness it's a dog! " - she's an animal lover, especially dogs and hamsters
— " oh look! that kid likes me! " - she loves kids and babies, and the love is mutual
— " i'm still a newbie at cooking so please help me " - she's slowly learning cooking
— " i'm not lying! " - she's really trustable

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this  is  just  the  beginning   time to rise to stardom

 FAVORITE GROUP : bts, shinhwa, vixx, beast, infinite, got7, winner, etc

 SONG SUGGESTIONS : f(x) pink tape and red light album odg

 FINAL MESSAGE : well idk, ily? hahah. oh, the ulzzang is kim jayoung

 PASSWORD : woohyun

 

 

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LuminousMusicEnt
#1
Hey Rin,
your time for review has come ;) (sorry for the tardiness XD)

For Automatic, because the original song is slow,sleazy,y songs XD It would be wonderful if you could have your voice changes like how the originall its ws song. Honestly, it feel a bit bland to my ears becuase it feel flat. From my opinion, you could try imitate the way it song to make the song more wonderful and interesting to hear. Hehee. With SHINee Danger too it feel bland. I dont know the original song but it feel bland to my ear. I think you need more power and just like I suggested try to imitate the way it is sang but of course with within your vocal limit. Honestly it wasnt the bad but it was abit bland to hear until the end of the song like Automatic. Hehee And I ws looking forward for your harmony. And for Ahyeah, I think your show so muchhh improvement, feels check, power check, not bland anymore. ;)
Ah yeah, and the only part I was tiny dissappointed on chorus part. You did well on LE, Hani and Junghwa part. Ah yeah is so much better than Automatic and Danger and I especially love the whisper part ;) Overall I think you need to have power, try to use head voice for the high notes instead of falsetto (but I dont have tips for that cuz I always used falsetto too XDD). Rin hwaiting! <3

Zee
Blu3Wind
#2
Rin, I feel like you have already joined a lot of collabs and we haven't reviewed you yet. Thank you for your patience, here is my review.

Your notes seem stable on most parts. In Automatic there were several parts where you had troubles whenever you switched to using falsetto to reach the higher notes. Same when it gets too low like in Dangerous, you start to lose the stability of some notes. But good job for hitting the high notes in Ah Yeah.

In my opinion, your voice fits y type of songs more like Ah Yeah. Automatic was okay too, but Danger didn't do your voice as much justice as it deserves. Also based on the Pepe collab, I think you fit the y rap with attitude more. I might actually like you more as a rapper than as a singer. XD

So work more on the notes. This is something I have troubles with as well and I don't know how to solve it other than just rerecording over and over again, making slight changes to the pitch of my voice, hoping it was the right pitch XD Hahaha.. And also maybe to add more attitude. Like in Automatic, it would've been nice if you tried to sing in a more "y" way that fits the song. Cause it comes out when you rap.. So now you need to display it through the singing too :)

Hopefully this helped! BTW, how did you get so much views for your songs on SoundCloud???

- Melody
hommage #3
if anyone is reviewing my application, i would like to change my audition clips with
http://soundcloud.com/dareenchristabel/red-velvet-automatic
https://soundcloud.com/dareenchristabel/shinee-dangerous and
https://souncloud.com/dareenchristabel/exid-ah-yeah

thanks!