So I have quite a few works in progress, and I figured I should post a few tidbits of 'me here to see what y'all think.

*1.1 In retrospect, Jiho thinks to himself later, Kyung might be a pirate and a bad person, but he wasn't too bad of a guy.

*1.2 "Of course you tourists would. People like you two always are doing dumb things like that." Taeil sighed.

*1.3 They always said the world was going to end in a bang. In reality it ends with more of a wimper and a dull thump-- a dull thump that has suddenly invaded Jiho's dream world; couldn't they see he was busy having a nice dream?

2. "WHY DON'T WE SET THEM UP THEN?" Daewoong hollers at full volume, waving his arms around as if he'll take off in flight like a goddamned bird in any minute.

3. Swaddled in an old grey cabled sweater, he looked like he stepped out of an ancient photograph, like some relic from another, long forgotten world.

4. "I hate detention so much man, I could have spent my morning sleeping in or some ." Joe groaned, walking into a wall out of pure exhaustion.

5. Giri waved her arms in the air. "And it's a great way to meet guys so we gotta dress cute."

6. Bom only had the finest, hence the knock-off gucci recliner she had bought on her last visit to her cousins in Shanghai.

7. " yes you should have. I am the one who jumped in first. I am the one who dealt with the body. You just opened a window. So next time you better be faster." Kyung growled, tapping his foot.

8. To Chen and Tao's surprise the door was unlocked, and the two slipped into the room unnoticed.

9. Daewoong whispered to him when he thought no one was looking. "Just ignore them."

10. Been to Hell twice before, it's not that bad. Food there is to die for.

*Just a note, 1.1, 1.2, and 1.3 are part of one story, they're all just different chapters. I'm planning out this story since I think it's going to be pretty damn long.

So which ones do you like or hate? I'd love to hear your comments, criticisms, ideas, hate, etc.