Joon and Mir have been friends since childhood, but what will happen when things get a bit strange? Will Mir stick with Joon, or are things too weird for him? Mir recalls these past events a couple years after they take place.
Chapter 6: This is amazing and really well-written T_____T the plot moved nicely as I noticed a lot strange things about Joon. Seriously, I got shock when Mir suddenly see joon's lifeless parents... and from that part, I understand what happened to Joon >~<
I love both ending~ but I prefer the first ending, for me it was more suitable because a psycho couldn't change themselves easily before something 'knocked' their heart X3
Chapter 6: wow! I'm in awe! that was incredible! both creepy, gripping and intriguing. I felt so bad for Joon and at the same time poor 6 year old Mir couldn't understand the meaning of what he discovered!
I loved this story very much though my romantic side decided to opt for ending number 2...
Chapter 6: It's me again.
Last night (on Halloween I know) I talked with two friends about fanfictions which creeped us out and stuff. And my friend and I brougt this story up again. And so we both searched for this today and now I've read it again.
And I just wanted to say that I really ____ing love this fanfic. I could just repeat all the words I said in my first comment, but this would be kinda senseless ^-^"
So, it's just me, saying again how amazing written this story is! *places a plate with cookies and leaves* <3
I like the first ending XD
Though it's tragic, it gave me different emotions. Anger as to why did Joon didnt make "his game" clear enough, double anger to the policemen because why the hell did they shoot him -_- etc. i really, really like it.
The killing parts esp. with Joon's parents creeped me out.
The romance made me smile.
I love this <3
I hope I find the right words.
This was an amazing story and I love both endings. Really. Just awesome.
And to shorten my comment, I'll just tell you that I'm the friend that aiyuki__ just wrote about in her comment :'D
Otherwise I would write mostly the same that she has just written~ ^-^"
(And I'm ing glad that she gave me the link to your story!)
Anyway, I enjoyed this a lot and I would actually love to read the whole thing from Joon's sight.
Okay.
I really just have to try to put my thoughts into words.
I've found this fanfiction and started reading while I talked to a friend on the phone.
And I can say that the first chapters really cracked me up. I just had tears in my eyes, I was so shocked and somehow scared of Joon and I could hardly describe it.
I described the plot to my friend and told her that she has to read it too. Oh my god, I really can't put my thoughts into words right now. In the beginning I really didn't expected anything, you know I'm not the type who's easily scared or something like that. But when Joons "toy" first has been mentioned I already had the suspicion that this will be something big in here, but when I thought something like that he could eventually have killed a real animal for it I was like "Stupid, why do you think something like this, he's a child!" When I read that I was right I sat there like "OH MY GOOOD" and literally went crazy with it.
My friends' and my first suspicion was that Joon would start to make his bullies to his "friends" too and Mir would try to stop him or something like that, but the version you wrote was actually quite good!
The image of Joon killing his parents and make them to his "friends" somehow reminded me of the Anime Naruto, I don't know if you watch/read it, but I mean where Sasori makes his parents to his puppets and so on (I'm Anime-fan, so I often associate with it^^)
Anyways~ I really enjoyed your writing style and also the different endings have been good!
Thank you for this awesome story, and I'd love to read more like this! Or maybe a sequel from Joons sight? Or a relapse?
You really catched on me with this topic! Really loved it! >//<
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