Breaking Out is Cool - but Breaking In??? part two

my high school life - in one shots
     "GAH! Man, I'm stuffed!!!" Donghae sighed in satisfaction. "Who brought the seafood sushi?"
     "You're welcome, you little glutton," I smiled. Heechul chuckled, handing Donghae a napkin. My smile faltered a little bit when I saw her: Jessica. She looked awesome, as per usual. I can see why Heechul fell for her. Though.. I didn't think she was actually going to bring Jerk here. I wonder how Heechul is doing...
     "I'm okay, honey."
     He snuck up on me AGAIN! Is this guy a psychic ninja or something? Oh! And just like that - he disappears!!! If only I didn't love you...
     "You sure, baby?" I was worried. Jessica was his first serious girlfriend. I just knew he wasn't really okay. My eyes stayed glued on Heechul.
     "Yuna, are you all right?" SeulGi asked. "You seem really distracted."
     "I'm - "
     "Hey, Yuna - wanna dance?" Eunhyuk suggested. My best friend always knew how to make me feel better. Well, after Heechul. He happened to play that song "Sorry Sorry" - my all time favorite dance song.
 
     Sorry Sorry Sorry Sorry naega naega naega meonjeo, nege nege nege ppajeo
ppajeo ppajeo beoryeo baby, Shawty Shawty Shawty Shawty nuni busyeo busyeo busyeo, sumi makyeo makyeo makyeo naega micheo micheo baby
     (Sorry Sorry Sorry Sorry - First of all, I-I-I fell for you-you-you. Fell-fell completely baby. Shawty Shawty Shawty Shawty - My eyes are blinded-blinded-blinded. My breathing's stopped-stopped-stopped. I'm going crazy-crazy baby.)

     All of a sudden, I felt someone wrapping his arms around my stomach. I was caught off guard - especially when he sang to me:
 
     Hey! ije geuman naege wajullae, jeongmal michil geonman gata yeah, nan neoman saranghago sipeo jeoldae dasi hannun pal ssaenggak eopsseo hey hey hey
     (Hey - will you come to me now? I'm going crazy again and again, yeah.. I want to love only you. I'll never think of pursuing another one's arm - hey hey hey...)

 
     I would have been ecstatic about his singing, his sincerity and the look he gave me... if only Jessica wasn't there.
     "OH!!! So that's how it is!" she huffed and stormed out the school. I wanted to run after her - to try to explain what was going on - until I was stopped. By Yunho.
     "Just let her go - if she won't support your relationship, then what kind of friend is she to you?" he reasoned. I was completely overwhelmed with his advice until I just realized where we were at.
     "Oh my god - I'm sorry we never told you!!!" I apologized. I am so dead.
     "Whoo!!! It's about time!!!" Eunhyuk and Donghae high-fived each other. My jaw dropped instantly.
     "We always thought you guys were a perfect couple - your traits compliment each other so well, like your maturity and his mood making skills, you're both incredibly smart and perceptive, and you - you guys are just too cute when you tease each other!" Seulgi laughed.
     "Was it that obvious?" Heechul smiled, holding my hand. As we were talking about our relationship, we made our way back to the bonfire. We lost ourselves into random conversations, laughing and smiling all night. My eyes were starting to fall, so I leaned on my guy's shoulder. I could feel his smirk as he laid his head on mine.
     "I love you... Heechul oppa."
     "I love you... Yuna - my little princess..."
 
                                  
 
i'm sorry for it taking so long to update. i'm glad i got the chance to though... it's been crazy since i last updated. especially since i figured out that i still like the guy i've been writing about. oh my geez - it's been like what two years and my feelings are still doing this to me about him... sigh... is it that hard to forget your first love? i'd like to know what you think so please comment if you can, or want^^
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magnaeline
#1
awesome....
xAnnieRyeowookx
#2
cool.
thelucifer #3
omo!! unnie/dongsaeng - ur so awesome!!! sorry - i 4got our age dif n wat 2 call u*blush in embarassment* n i do agree on usin personal stuff bt jus not directly tho. dont want th whole site 2 kno my sad story... hey, wen u write bout th sad times, do all th memories seem 2 flash back b4 ur eyes?
SourireDAnge
#4
wooooowww~ anothre sweet chapter ^^ kekeke~<br />
altho its a bit short its still awesome regardless ^^<br />
@previous comment: anieyo ^^<br />
kekekeke~ honey...if uve read my stories then u wuld noe tht all my stories are from my personal dreams and my personal life xDDD if u rite stories based on ur personal life then it wuld sound much more convincing and realistice u noe??? ^^ anyways...im not commenting here to giv u advice but if u DO want advice from a pro [not tht im saying i am xDDD ive only ritten 37 fanfics after all...O.o...thts not tht much i dun think xD] just cme comment on my wall and ill be more than glad to help u ^^<br />
otherwise, ill comment every time u update ><<br />
hopefully anyways ^^<br />
gl~
thelucifer #5
thanx 4 th comment^-^ sorry bout th jumpy parts - didnt want 2 tell life story or turn my oneshots in2 a full on story. thn it would become 2 personal n i may really bend th truth of wat really hapnd on those certain days... hope my next shot'l b a good one - i'l upd8 by end of th wk^-^
SourireDAnge
#6
woooowww~<br />
sweeett~ ^^ altho it was a tad bit jumpy in some places and some places were a bit confusing but its nice ^^<br />
keep it up honey <br />
^^