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HOGWARTS 2ND GENERATION ▬ APPLY CLOSED

reviews applicants #12

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angeline rae king

 

First of, thanks for being the first applicant and for applying! A cookie for you~♥.  I love that she has so many nicknames. I mean Cocoa totally adorkable. GRYFFINDOR!! and gifs everywhere yay for you Gee. Her personality is queen. I just love how she is warm hearted and confident but even sarcastic LOVE IT. I will thank you for adding a load of trivias and even her wand! That's a big hidden point. Her food obsession is cute and dorky at the same time and as you say she is a complete mix of the weasley twins and ron which i find really funny. Her background was detailed and good and I find it great that she has a love for magical creatures. I can just see the face of Arky when she saw the creatures for the first time. Her family is really good looking as well♥. OMG gurl Oliver Wood's son? Are you trying to kill me with the perfectness?! I LUUUUVV her friends and their relationship. Okay let's talk love shall we? I see that your pickle is a real cutie..  Arky's out-going and prankster attitude really fits with his calm and composed personality perfectly. Like they are two puzzle pieces that are destined to fit together. Can i say that their love story is so FREAKING CUTE. They learn things of eachother and if that's not cute i don't know what is. Awwwwww i'm just a pink puddle of pudding here. So let's talk a few errors T^T
*Kento is a pureblood right? Being a pureblood means not having any muggle devices or hobbies. only if they were like taught in muggle studies or by a muggle. So the possibility for him having a mobile is slim to none. As well as his intrest if soccer so if you want to keep that please write how he learned it. Thank you ♥
THANKS FOR APPLYING ☻

hyuuuunMi-ahh — accepted

Na bohye

 

Okay let me start by saying that her personality is AWESOME! I love how it's different from other characters. Her personality is just so marvelous, i love the "i'm greater then everyone else" concept, just wonderful. It adds such a mix in the characters. Thanks for applying btw, here's your cookie~. Everything is just so detailed like i can see bohye infront of me and i can just see Bohye and Sohye squabble. ♥ I bow for the trivias. it's like i even know what she eats for breakfast xD. It's really intresting for a pureblood to have such an interest in muggle cluture which is very fun, and unusual by the way. Her parents were death eaters? wicked. Her background is lovely as well and that about a ghostly smile at the end? priceless. LUV IT. Her family is detailed and great as well. Soooo let's talk about her pickle okay? i'm not that into exo and all but Kai is a freaking y pickle. His personality suits him perfectly as well. I can just imagine Kai glaring at the boys that follows Bohye around and then brush it of like it's nothing when she talks to him... Let's just say that i fell in love with their love story it's just so ghfjdskz. Of course you can add scene requests later but just notify me when you do so i can read them. I find nothing wrong with the app.
THANKS FOR APPLYING ☻

0-milk — accepted

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candy rei sun kim

 

First of all thanks for making my applyfic the first one you apply for  ♡´・ᴗ・`♡. I feel honored. ♥  Ohhh Candy is a cleanfreak? all the dirty places at Hogwarts must make her annoyed xD I love your trivias by the way. She loves banana milk?! Me too that's the bomb! It's also good that you elaborated on the likes, dislikes as well. Her  family and friends are great written too i like them ^-^. OH MY! YOU HAVE TAEHYUNG AS LOVE INTEREST! I mean he's like in my top 10 pickle list♥. I can just see Taehyung teasing Candy with holding up a dirty sock or something to her face "Look at it!" xD.
But i've got to say that you have pretty many errors but it's nothing that can't be fixed right? Cx
*This thing is with her age, how can she be in the 6th year when she is born 1997. if you are going to have her being hold back two years so please write that in the background or make her age more suitable for her grade.
* Her face claim should be linked to a gallery.
* What's her comfortable style? Add pics or write more please~.
* As for her personality could you please elaborate a bit more on the traits?
* There's nothing about her years at Hogwarts in the background, i mean she is in the 6th year.

THANKS FOR APPLYING ☻

Rxspberry — accepted

celestina bellrose

 

Oh my~ Thanks for applying with a western face claim and with Gigi Hadid for that matter♥. From what i can see this girl is a straight up Slytherpuff one of the lost houses and i luuv it. The app is so detailed that I could see every word that you wrote about her in front of me and that just get you a cookie. Can i tell you how much i adore the relationship that Ceci has with her brothers? Stinka? Priceless xD. Her personality is a good mix and twist with the hufflepuff trait as well as some out of place traits. Every trait holds up for the other which is great. The likes, dislikes, habits and trivias are wonderful. I like that she enjoyes studying but quidditch as well. Sooo she's a chaser for the hufflepuffs?I might as well start writing some quidditch scenarios then? ^-^. She can't pronounce miserably and sixth? I'm going to have some hellish fun with that C:<.  I don't mind that put a lot of Ferro in her background I find it quite sweet that you included the background of her only friend and how they met which was hilarious btw. Her family section is really great aswell I like that one of her brothers works at Weasleys' Wizard Wheezes. Now let's take a look at her pickle. wooooooww~ Lucky Blue Smith? Let's call Cici lucky now 'cause that boy is smoking!  His personality is on point just so you know and Cici's and Lucky's first meeting just brings a smile to my face.I just adore everything about their realtionship and background just soooo awwwwwwwwwwww. ♡〜٩( ˃́▿˂̀ )۶〜♡
But their are a few errors here and there..
* It's a bit strange that Cici locked herself into her room after her mothers death. If her mother died at Hogwarts in the big battle that would mean that Cici was four months when that happened. (the battle was 2th may 1998) Babies aren't aware of things like that last time i checked.
* That thing in the background about Snape well he died in 1998 so that wouldn't make sense replace it to Horance Slughorn instead.

THANK YOU FOR APPLYING ☻

-ticktock — accepted

Luther Darby

 

BLESS YOU my friend for applying as a boy. omg like just yaaaassss. Joe Sugg? I absolutely luv that guy. Everything is so fricking funny, detailed and adorkable!! A 5th year human being great!♥ His peronality is the BOMB it's just a nice mix of everything and his similarities with just gives me the feels. FRED T^T. Lu's impulsivness mixed with his laziness makes a hilarious combo thanks for that. His trivias are GOLD worth and can i just say that I love how much interaction he has with the original and their children. Fred II and Luther the new Fred and George.. Do you know how many times that made my feels stir?!You EVUL! His fanboyness is just wonderful. Fanboy over Teddy, crush on Hermione and Victoire and his mother had a crush on George... Omg just smiles and smiles. The relationship he's got with the potters and the weasleys are just so sweet♥. I just smiled through the whole app while I was reading. Everything about him is just so freaking magical that i can die over here. You put in Marigold and Domino!! Props to you son! ♥ Luther and his sister's relationship is just marvelous. Listen up her soon to become ladies of Hogwarts this pretty little pickle doesn't have a freaking love interest and we want him to have one doesn't we?.  So just put apply in the love interest section -wink wink- I CAN'T HANDLE THIS APP IT'S JUST SOO AKGDJNDHJS
THANK YOU FOR APPLYING ☻

sakuraciel — accepted

Ivona Clayton

 


Hi and thanks for applying to my story. I'm going to be honest and say that i love her surname. CLAYTON it just gives some sort of image of being over everybody else idk CLAYTON!! You applied with a swedish face claim that's just a little secret golden egg right there (i'm a swede soo.. xD) It's unique that she is a muggleborn that's tries to pose as a pureblood interesting.... Ivona's appearance and style is really beautiful and i really like that she has to be fashionable even when she's sleeping. ♥ I really like her personality actually she's all about that sass which I like. Her love for animals is really cute and something really suprising about her personality. The strange thing is that you made her the kind of person i personally isn't that found of but Ivona got herself twirled up in my mind. So i like her xD.  She doesn't like hershey's?!! o.o  Great trivia btw medium rare~ meat~ annnd just so you know his name is Domino not Dominic xD The reason for her hate for birds is hilarious♥. Who the hell is cutting all these onions? her...her background it's so sad and all so bitter with a bit of sweetness to it. My angsty little heart loves it T^T. Her friends personality is diverse which i enjoy and can i say this without being creepy? Her brother is a real hottie xD. KOOKIE-KUN!! YES! Thier love story is sooooo freaking sweet i'm gettin' diabetes here! ajhdfajdskjfiijfjid .
THANK YOU FOR APPLYING ☻

Captaindukbokki — Accepted

chance amelye perkins

 

Hi just saying your face claim is pretty pretty btw and thanks foor applying. Can I say something about her being the school's and being a griffindor? I LOVE IT!! I'm pretty tired with the sterotype that everyone in slytherin are the "bad" ones and it's great that she's a griffindor ♥♥ Her personality is a greeat balance an i like that you didn't go cray cray about making her a and forgot the good in her. ohhoo she likes hockey players? Me too Cx they're hot aren't they? Maple syrup... i hope she doesn't drink it from the bottle xD that girl doesn't like strawberries OR chocolate?!! WHAT KIND OF DEVIL IS SHE!! o.o haha hell no... xD  I just love the bittersweet background.Her rivals part is just splendid. omg OMG O.M.G CODY CHRISTIAN! -fan girl scream- ♥♥ oh my~ what a little cute xD Sounds like a good popular handsome and beautiful couple to me and i like it.
THANK YOU FOR APPLYING ☻

missxox — ACCEPTED

Ana claire zabini

 

HEEELLLOOOY how are you this fine evening, night or day? LEt me say that i live for Ana's nicknames. Malfoy's little Z love it. I'm just saying that i love her conection to Draco and Scorpius. Her style is just fantastic! ♥ Her personality is great but could you please write a bit more on the traits and stuff please~.Her trivias, likes, dislikes and hobbies are lovely. Books, snow and coffee the perfect combo..♥  I like how she has such a connection with the muggle world even though that she is a pure blood. Btw who doesn't love teen wolf? It's such a great show and oh my~ Dylan o'brien. I love her background it's well balanced with some bittersweet and some just lovely parts in it. ♥ awwwww Ana's and Scorpius relationship is sooo cute and adorkable, I SHIP IT ♥♥ ohohohoh i get to play matchmaker here aswell mihihihihihihih but don't worry if i can't find you an applicant i may make you an oc c:< mohhahahahahhahah. 
THANK YOU APPLYING ☻

Minrin04 — accepted

charlice kammeri

 

Helloy and thanks for applying. Zendaya is a true beauty isn't she? It's fun to see a really mixed character. Her style is good aswell. But i'm really sorry to say thi sbut you've got like a lot of errors T^T. Where is her birthday and birthyear? The positive traits overshadows the bad traits so please add some more negative traits please~ Ummmm... jade? Where is the great background section? How she came from america to britian? how did she discover her powers? Did you forget all about that little section if you did it will be sad ;-; . Her trivias are good oh strange gurl here.. How can she choose cheese over chocolate?! xD As long as you fix these things you will be accepted.
THANK YOU FOR APPLYING ☻

million-raindrops — ERROR

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Not at all.

KIAN LYLE NOTT

 

Ohoy and thanks for applying! oh my god OMG!! A FREAKING 13 YEAR OLD!!! oh i thank you my friend for doing this vi T^T you make me tearyeyed. Pip..pip.. that's the cutest nickname EVAR! Like this guy's appearance is so freaking cute that i can turn into caramel pudding ♥. I really like that before he entered Hogwarts he was the complete oppisite of "normal" or rather the sterotype of a slytherin, and that he grew with everyday is just wonderful ♥. Persuasive i see.. mhihih that's gonna be fun c:<   His cowarldy is just so... soo ....YES he's so freaking precious like omg. He's a genius aswell the pip is smart! His likes and dislikes are great aswell and his trivias.. I CAN'T!  I just love his background it's really sweet and lovely but with a few cracks here and there wich is wonderful. Like I can't handle Ellinor she's just so adorbs that i can't function over here. James and his meeting.... i like c:< . James Sirius Potter is actually born 2004 and is a first as he starts Hogwarts this year but i'm gonna let it slip because I love your app so much♥ there you have the cookie. Love is a wonderful thing isn't it? Their love story is so sweet that my little heart gets full of butterflies ♥ Why does your app remind me so much of my past experinces? xD o you have a acces to my mind or what? I want to say that I really enjoyed reading your app and i'm honoured to be having you apply for my story ^-^
THANK YOU FOR APPLYING ☻

GREENBOX — ACCEPTED

Valerie midford

 

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EVERA SYLVESTER

 

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-ticktock
#1
Chapter 4: im a little bit late but definitely mix of everything! because they balance out each other so well
missxox
#2
Chapter 4: I think it can be cool if it was a mix of everything. i want to see how the characters interact together and fun adventures at the same time.
with a touch of romance can't be bad too.
luv_kero
2456 streak #3
Chapter 4: I think a mix of everything would be good. That way you can cater to everyone's interests and tie everything together. :)
ninjaswrath
#4
Chapter 3: a mix of everything would be awesome :3 leaning towards more on adventure perhaps? xD
greenbox
#5
Chapter 4: Perhaps friendship and romance blossoming and lighting the way through an adventure? I keep imagining something that happened during HP book 5 happening and the characters have to do something to find a way to get rid of the problem.
purrmaid
#6
Chapter 4: A mix of everything would be lovely ^^
MinRin04 #7
Chapter 4: It would be interesting if there is a mix of everything :)
MinRin04 #8
Chapter 3: Thank you for the review ^_^
I added things on her personality, please tell me if it's okay :)
http://www.asianfanfics.com/blog/view/1053314
missxox
#9
Chapter 3: ayee! thanks for the awesome review.
every school needs a girl that scares everyone haha c:
ninjaswrath
#10
Chapter 1: can't wait for my review *A*