Shadow Affairs

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Shadow Affairs 

It was an act of fate. That's what I am going to leave it at. He was never supposed to see me. Wrong place and wrong time. I am not suppose to exist. Just a ghost who comes and goes. Why did he appear? He is the only one to make my heart beat other than when I'm working. I wasn't suppose to be around people who attract attention. What am I supposed to do?

 

Foreward~~~~~~~

Hello,

My name is menguin! This story was inspired from a crazy dream I had. Due to schedules I will update as ofter as I can. I hope to have you support and to recieve lots of love from you! Please dont forget to subscribe, comment, and if you think it is worth it, a upvote! Silent readers dont be shy! Thanks for reading

XOXO

Menguin <3

 

Thank you To Hope Graphic Shop ft. BTS for the awesome cover art!!! and thank you Bangtan advertisment!!!

XSYKOTICA

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-jhope
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Chapter 2: Hi love! I saw your "ad" on my wall so I decided to read your fic. I love the plot of your story and I'm sure you'll have really good content in the future; however, I feel like your writing style is particularly choppy due to all of the short sentences. I feel like there could be more flow in your writing if you were to write more compound or complex sentences. I understand English might not be your first language, or English isn't your strongest subject and writing fics help you improve (bc that's what I do hehe), but there's always room for improvement. Sorry if it sounds as if I'm criticizing you :(, but I really like your plot and I think you have so much potential in you; a part of writing fics is that you are able to grow into a better writer.

On the side note, I'm looking forward to your upcoming chapters!! I love how you portrayed Jack and I can't wait for Infinite and BTS to be introduced in the upcoming chapters~