The Fox and the Hound

Description

Yifan is the hound who is destined to catch everything he chases. Zitao is the fox who can never be caught. 

Foreword

This is based off of the greek mythological story, Laelaps and the Teumessian Fox, the story is very brief but I really fell in love with the paradoxical/opposing natures concept and decided to use my favorite pairing to create a story with it. I even based my username on this. I hope you can find enjoyment in this and if you do want to look up the tale I would love to hear your opinions on how you think I did. Also any advice, constructive criticism, comments, or concerns you would like to send my way I would be more than happy to receive.

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out_yourgaze #1
Chapter 1: This is so sad and beautyfully written! ;_;
LittleStarinthesky #2
Chapter 1: well it has to end somehow... because one can only take up so much pain before he loses it.
kennocha #3
Chapter 1: This was beautiful. I loved every description you wrote in here :)
chrysantslurvletters #4
Chapter 1: I'm crying..this is sooo sad..I can feel the paain of being so near that you nearly grasp it but still it there's a small space exist between..
Taoris95 #5
Chapter 1: Oh god. Oh god this was amazing. My heart—
First of all, the vocabulary. Your word usage and your ability to piece words together is absolutely stunning. It's rare to find an author who can describe things with such skill, and wonderful to read.
Secondly, your characters. My heart is bleeding for them as I read; I can physically feel their pain and longing. I want so badly for Yifan to be able to just hold Zitao to himself...
I'm definitely going to be recommending this story to others on here! Fantastic job; I'll be looking forward to more stories from you
Thank you so much authornim; hwaiting! <3
heegrand #6
Chapter 1: Great story!
SelcyMorimoto #7
Chapter 1: You have the best words... the most beautiful choice of wordings in the whole aff world.
Beavo! Love this so much... though it hurts pretty much like hell
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