Only You, Jiyong

Description

Jiyong is not happy with all those interactions between his boyfriend and their maknae Seungri.

Foreword

Okay, I have had this idea for a while now and I just HAD to write it out! With all the BaeRi interactions going on, I kept wondering how Jiyong would react to all those lovey-dovey moments between Youngbae and Seungri! I normally don't write fics based on real life events but this one is just so perfect for a one-shot imo! ^^ 

I hope you'll like it! ♥

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Ms-Hyde #1
Chapter 1: So sweettt!! My heart died.
alfsecret #2
Chapter 1: I already read it twice and I'm still flying when I imagine how sweet Youngbae to Jiyong :3
Oh my God that's a really great story :D
Two thumbs up author-nim :D
skeletonfruitcake #3
Chapter 1: Very sweet, I liked it.
northerndownpour #4
Chapter 1: Woot woot~ my BB OTP n_n
Jealous Jiyong is so cute and adorable haha...
raveenam #5
Chapter 1: Omg!! This is so so nice! My heart!! (<3) the insta references and dialogues were too good! Had a good laugh and just the right amount of feels!!
michiru10 #6
Chapter 1: The fic is so cuteee! Incorporating things that happened in the real life is a really good idea too! I like this story so much. ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ
Yumi-chan #7
Chapter 1: I like your story. It is awesome *-*
t-oresama #8
Chapter 1: Okay! Finally have internet again :D

First, of course, is that I still love this story. Since I write canon-based stories a lot I'm glad BigBang's real-life antics inspired you to write this. I also like that you mention specific past instances like the time GD and YB found those snacks in that manager's room (I was seriously so angry for them when I read that article x.x). It gives the story more depth, especially when you're bringing all the members together for something that's so nostalgic and meaningful to them. Speaking of which, you wrote all of the members so realistically too! I don't think I've ever seen you write more than GDYB, so I'm pleasantly surprised by how you've characterized the whole group and I could picture that scene very vividly. The second scene progressed so naturally and was, again, to how GDYB really are- GD being somewhat stubborn and YB being so caring. I could feel the strains of tension from GD, not wanting to admit what was bothering him, but the second it came out, ALL of it came out. That sort of internalized anxiety and doubt can really mess with a person and that's exactly what we see in GD's confession, which also makes it so heartbreaking. Of course, there's a give and take with relationships; YB can't possibly know this is how GD's feeling without this confession, so you've got this great mutual understanding and sympathy, and I appreciate that you made it mutual and had GD realizing he was probably overreacting, though the initial sentiment was justified. Also that kiss *_* Giiiiiirl, that was passion in a paragraph! Again, the transition from angst to fluff is really well done, and hinges on YB's reaction, which is that of a doting, if not sometimes oblivious, boyfriend. Oh, and that last line... they've got a lot of making up to do, eh? ;D

Overall just a really cute and brilliantly executed one-shot. Thank you for sharing it! <3 This is definitely one of my new faves from you! :D
t-oresama #9
Chapter 1: AHHHHH THIS WAS SO CUTE ;_; And yay! You're writing canon stories too now :D I'm on mobile right now and my internet at home has been broken since Sunday (which is also keeping me from updating, as it turns out...) but when it's all fixed I'll leave you a better comment than this; I just hate writing out long things on a cell phone keypad haha. Great one-shot though! I needed some fluff in my week :3
GdBaebyVIP #10
Chapter 1: Aww this is so sweet the flow is so good for ty part need a sequel
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