Not So Lucky Charms.

Description

Chanyeol is sleep deprived, Baekhyun is a desperate man, and the store clerk probably quits after everything that happens.

Foreword

Beakyeol is important to me. I hate Fruit Loops, but Lucky Charms are acceptable.

 

p.s: You're welcome, Roxie.

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peter- #1
Ah yes, the epitome of romance. Good job my son. Sudeddy is proud.
ParkMiyoung
#2
Chapter 1: really funny and cute! <3 though you may want to reread it. All the mistakes it has can be easily corrected once read through. for example the sentence: "Said buried buried lets our a groan of frustration." should be: "Said buried man lets out a groan of frustration."
It contains the biggest mistake, so it's not all that bad, but if you read it over, you can correct them and make it a lot better to read ^^
graysky
#3
That was cute hehe, a wonderful way to meet sb :D
Brownies_
#4
Chapter 1: Omg i love Chanyeol red hair! I liked how they met but i think I saw a few typos, not sure because i was reading fast but it's ok!