Her Perfect Little Brother

Description

What if I'm the reason why you're gone now? Am I still your PERFECT LITTLE BROTHER?

Foreword

This was my first oneshot... Don't be harsh wtih me... English is not my mother tounge

 

Warning: It's a oneshot but it's freakin' long. Mian~!

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AlyxLee
#1
SadTT^TT
Wolfram_iflameu #2
That was a little on the sad side, though I really liked it! Good job~
-Nyaa- #3
Poor Henry, s tell him off even though he could have died é_è<br />
Good story! I like both your idea and the way you wrote it, I had a good time reading~ =)<br />
But there's one thing that bothered me: the Korean words/sentences. There's no problem with "hyung", "noona" or "ahjusshi" etc., but except for those ones I don't understand Korean >_<' (and I'm pretty sure I'm not the only one ^^') So please, when you write an English fanfic, write it ALL in English ^^'<br />
(btw what do those mean? "jebal", "mwo", "jamkkanmanyo", "mworago", "Nae hanappuniya" ? thx~)
AbsolutelyLovely #4
nice read^^