A Crush or More? [HIATUS]

Description

Hee-Jin always developed a crush quickly to any guy which was nice, sweet, good looking, anything positive that you could name. But this floating feeling never lasted long and never developed in something more. Would this year be different?  Find out!~

 

 

 

Note;

Alternative age is used in order for people to be in the same class xd

This story will make use of the education system in the Netherlands which you can refer to here if you're not familiar with it.

Also, I figured every school have different time schedules, so I'll use the one from the high school I went ^^ 

08.25 - 09.30

1st period

09.35 - 10.40

2nd  period

20 min. break

11.00 - 12.05

3rd period

12.10 - 13.15

4th period

30 min. break

13.45 - 14.50

5th period

14.55 - 16.00

6th period

Foreword

Omg my first fanfic xd I'm so nervous haha xd It will be made from imagination and real experiences.

I hope you will all enjoy reading ^^ 

The story is better than the title and description I promise XD I at creating those... ^^'

 

If you don't understand some parts, don't hesitate to ask. I'll try to explain it as best as I can (i'm not that good at explaing hehe ^^') Also, if you see any typos or anything you can tell me and will edit if posssible :) (Of course I hope there aren't any though :p)

 

Tip; Don't read the comments before reading ^o^ Possible spoiler alert xd

 

Other stories:

Good Knight Kiss

Touchdown to your Heart (completed)

My Artificial Love (completed)

Spellbook of Life

Luminous Love

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annabloem
#1
Chapter 11: omg yay, they're going on a trip :D
I'm just like: who will be her tutor. Why doesn't Henry tell her a name THE SUSPENSE!
Omg Hae-In xD
poor Hae-in extra PE
What's with all the teachers keeping secrets at this school lol xD
And Mark is so cute <3
I KNEW IT, I KNEW IT WOULD BE XIUMIN. OMG <3 I LOVE IT ANYWAY
OMG Xiumin so cute <3

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although he was probably true. - he was probably right / it was probably true
annabloem
#2
Chapter 10: OMG, I was hoping for a chapter like this, showing Dia and Mark's past <3
This sounds like me way too much xD
Mark is soo cute <3
Mark and Dia are so cute together omg, I can't, you're killing me!
And Hee-jin is such a good friend too, omg!
omg and Dia and Myungsoo are cute too
what is this cuteness in this chapter!
I LOVE IT SO MUCH!
actually this whole chapter sounds like me a lot xD Except for the cute guys, but that can still happen xD

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are from my sources - according to my sources
about the said boy. - about said boy
bow in the right way. - bow the right
they both laughing. - they both laughed
nihil_
#3
Chapter 9: AHDHFJFGDKDSKJHSAD I SEE HEE-JIN IS BUILDING UP HER HAREM AH~N? :3c
But seriously the ending was so funny. It made me feel kinda bad for the children, though. Come on, they exerted so much effort :'¥
Wheezes lmao this is the most IC I've seen of Jungyoon omg /becauseicanrelatealotlol BROWNIES OMDFG /rolls on the ground
I STILL WANT TO KNOW WHO CHILDHOODFRIEND IS OMG
is it daehyun? or xiumin? I'm not familiar with the canon ages in this fic but I will laugh so hard if it was Namjoon or... ,or SEHO AHJUSSI--
BAYMAX ; A ; THAT LINE JDKDKFKSKS I HATE THAT MOVIE /WHY DID IT HAVE TO MAKE ME CRY SO MUCH--
And Hee-Jin and Dia talking,, their convo is so cute omg <3
I do hope Dia realizes that besides admiration (crushes and whatnot) myungsoo could be a ...staLKER!!! Zshsns but I'm pretty sure that even if he was, she'll just call him a secret admirer lol MYUNGSOO I HOPE YOU HAVE PURE INTENTIONS I will facefault so hard if he was just admiring her archery skills and no more --that would be so anti-climatic D:
pipoos omg lmao idk it sounds funny to me
and fancy sauce brands or something, it makes my head hurt JUST CALL IT PASTA SAUCE TT TT
and and, I just really want to reiterate that you have done a really good job with jungyoon omg so in character-- *^*
IS IT JUST ME OR THE LACK OF MELODY AND WOOHYUN IN THIS ONE IS SLIGHTLY DISCONCERTING (sorry for the random caps it's just that PASSION) yeah...
this chapter was very fun to read for me btw HUEHUEHUE have I reached character limit yet
annabloem
#4
Chapter 9: Hee-Jin is not boring! How could you think that Daehyun!!
omg because of you I know now who Bambam and Jackson are xD
Jackson missing feels so right xD Sorry Jackson xD
Woohoo, at least they are not complaining about me :D
I want a brother who brings me brownies too ;_;
Pipoos xD omg yay
what saus is tagliatelle sauce?? :O tagliatelle is just pasta, right??
OMGOMG, is it Xiumin?? That would be so adorable though :D
Baymax <3 <3
Myungsoo <3 /is totally become a stalker here xD I don't mind since it's Myungsoo though xD
Lolol, if Baro was my teacher I'd hate him if he did this. Like seriously? No mark? So mean!
OMG that last sentence <3

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It was one of her worst habits probably. - It was probably one
Why don’t you never come - why don't you ever
“Since I know you all longer, - Since I've known you for a while (?)
a side of one another yet. S - Another side of (?)
Hae-in #5
Chapter 8: "What type of guy do you fall for? Mark? - Eww no..." - HAHAHA XD 'Ew no', not even 'no'. No, she had 2 say EEEEEWWWW ╭ (oㅇ‿ o#)ᕗ
"Hee-Jin’s type is a mature guy for sure" - lol, no way. No, just... no.
"Today Hee-Jin had more confidence to confront Daehyun." - Confront, really?? XD
(థฺˇ౪ˇథ) Kekeke || “I’ll pay - No! I don’t want to be in your debt.” - not even 'iDon't want Xiumin 2 see that some other kind of guy is paying for my meal!'
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"Getting their order, they looked around for a seat and that’s when Hee-Jin spotted her little sister sitting with a guy at a table." Ok wow... I would just communicate w/ Jimin w/ putting self-destructing notes in his locker 2 (A) not talk w/ him and (B) prevent him 2 keep those (。◝‿◜。)
“Yeah let’s do that.” >> "No, let's not..." (≖ ‿ ≖)
Jimin is stupid =.= if some1 would ask me 'So you like me?' @ tht timing, I'd jux ignore them (because no answer would b suited 4 tht Qs) (´◉◞౪◟◉`)
Blu3Wind
#6
Chapter 8: Hahahahhahahah!!! I ship Hae-in and Jimin!!! Lolllll!!! Can i say something crazy.. I saw that one coming, the marriage line i mean XD
nihil_
#7
My comment isn't long but it conveys my feelings (*´Д`)ヾ(*´∀`*)ノ
annabloem
#8
Chapter 8: So Hee-jin wanted to be his type before???
Youngjae freaking adorable <3
gfff, Mark too <3 I can see why I dated him :P
Omg, I lolled at Jaebum's face xD
Daehyun and Hee-jin are freaking cute together, though :3
Daehyun is a total Bonbon xD Uhm.., No, I just know the japanese term xD
Totally bonding over cheesecake xD Cheesecake pairing <3
It feels like they are on a date xD And like they are talking about a second date right in front of Xiumin? He should get jealous xD
Frozen reference had me lol xD
Hae-in and Jimin <3<3<3
Write moooore <3 It's so awesome :D

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I’m not so on formalities.” - not so big on
dancing like a ball! - like at a
you’re parents - your parents
rich world. - world of the rich?
be in debt.” - in your debt
To not make it awkward if not more awkward, - ??
Blu3Wind
#9
Chapter 7: Lollll Hae-in's comments are still the best. Magnetism? No, personal space!!! Hahhahahaha my favorite part.

I thi j i will just ship hee-jin with anyone but xiumin. Huahahahahhah... Your fault for adding so many guys XD
nihil_
#10
Chapter 7: ok I just got home and saw the swing
omg it looks like a circle hammock I didn't notice that the seat was made of entangled ropes
seems fun to sit in e w e