the galaxies behind your eyelids

Description

 

 

if Minseok had been any more poetic, he would have dedicated a whole book to the universe in Luhan's eyes.

 

 

 

 

Foreword

 

title: the galaxies behind your eyelids

genre: future, deep slice of life? 

(idk which genres to place it in really; help me out on this one)

rating: G?

warnings: end of the world

word count: 2135

 

 

written at 3 a.m. listening to Someone I Know by Cho Hyung Woo, while having a fever topping 39 degrees celcius. I have no idea what I wrote whatsoever and I have not reviewed it either, so for all I know it might be right out crazily insane. Most likely, really. Do not write in the middle of the night with a fever. Just some helpful advise.

Comments much appreciated!

 

other xiuhan-stories include:

- sleepless (fluff drabble) - Promise? Promise. (one shot) - coffee shop (chaptered, 68+ pgs) -

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heyminseok #1
Chapter 1: i'll just leave the bucket of my tears here
CHAYNSOFGLASS #2
I'm so.. wow I can't explain! It was so perfect, so poetic, so deep. I feel like crying because your are right in every word! I could imagine everything and it's amazing. You are such a good writer, I'm your fan. I've read coffee shop and really loved it! You don't need to write many stuff to transmit the scent of real love that they have to each others. I love you <3 keep writing plz <3
kamikazepigeon #3
Chapter 1: Wow. Where do I even begin?
I absolutely adore this. I don't really know what I expected from the description, but damn.
The way you have aspects of religious philosophy and musings on life interwoven so effortlessly is amazing to say the least.
The imagery was almost beautiful in a way too and the way they died seemed almost symbolic? Like, the whole event should have been so chaotic, but it seemed almost peaceful in a sense. Almost as though some god, or something, was taking pity on the human race in the form of complete destruction. I don't know if that's what you were going for at all, but that's just how I interpreted it.
This story was just so pure and original and refreshing. I loved every word of it, truly.
Thank you for sharing. I'll be sure to look for your works in the future!
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