☁ the reviews.
☁ down memory lane/ a story about friendship。apply openthe secrets.
the secrets.
☁down memory lane with
hae jina (해지나).
hae jina (해지나).
one with lost memories
↺strikes: 0
so this is my character, who will obviously have no strikes...oops? very obviously, I will be using the three strikes system, and I have to say I'm a harsh reviewer and a pretty big grammar nazi, so I hope you don't get offended by my review, I am, after all, only trying to help. once again, hae jina will NOT be a major character, but she will help move along the plot greatly, so don't worry about the author taking everything for herself, I won't do that.
there are five statuses:
-chosen: your character is a part of the story, congratulations.
-accepted: there are no (major) errors and your character might be in the story.
-mistakes: there are glaring errors/too many errors, and I would appreciate it if you altered your app.
-pending: I haven't finished reading your app yet.
-rejected: you broke a huge rule, and I refuse to read your app.
STATUS: chosen.
so this is my character, who will obviously have no strikes...oops? very obviously, I will be using the three strikes system, and I have to say I'm a harsh reviewer and a pretty big grammar nazi, so I hope you don't get offended by my review, I am, after all, only trying to help. once again, hae jina will NOT be a major character, but she will help move along the plot greatly, so don't worry about the author taking everything for herself, I won't do that.
there are five statuses:
-chosen: your character is a part of the story, congratulations.
-accepted: there are no (major) errors and your character might be in the story.
-mistakes: there are glaring errors/too many errors, and I would appreciate it if you altered your app.
-pending: I haven't finished reading your app yet.
-rejected: you broke a huge rule, and I refuse to read your app.
STATUS: chosen.
UMJI (CHUU)
UNDECIDED
UMBREVOLUTION
☁down memory lane with
sang yiseul (쌍이슬).
plot #4
↺strikes: 0
hello Xiao, and thanks for applying! her basics were fine, and mu ni! I've always wanted to see people using her- or hong youkyung, they're both pretty. I must say I really like her style, the clothes are really cute, gahh <3 yiseul is a bully, and I love that about her- all her quietness and silence hides this insecure girl. I can't say it's original, but you described her greatly, yay! and oh god that cake face incident was just mean...and I love it. it actually seems like yiseul is disconnected from her whole family, but I digress. her trivials were very well done and her instagram is basically my feed goals. I laughed at the picture of mu ni you put in the password- it doesn't matter if your characters are dull and mean, they're layered, and that's all that matters. I found absolutely nothing wrong with your app, so you're accepted!
STATUS: accepted
hello Xiao, and thanks for applying! her basics were fine, and mu ni! I've always wanted to see people using her- or hong youkyung, they're both pretty. I must say I really like her style, the clothes are really cute, gahh <3 yiseul is a bully, and I love that about her- all her quietness and silence hides this insecure girl. I can't say it's original, but you described her greatly, yay! and oh god that cake face incident was just mean...and I love it. it actually seems like yiseul is disconnected from her whole family, but I digress. her trivials were very well done and her instagram is basically my feed goals. I laughed at the picture of mu ni you put in the password- it doesn't matter if your characters are dull and mean, they're layered, and that's all that matters. I found absolutely nothing wrong with your app, so you're accepted!
STATUS: accepted
MU NI (ROWKY)
N/A
CRYZTAL
☁down memory lane with
moon minji (문민지).
plot #1
↺strikes: 0
hello livi, and thanks for applying! first off, lee sungkyung <3 minji is underweight, and I don't really see a reason for that. please make her shorter or bump her weight up a little bit. her personality was short, but it had the details I needed. her basics, background, and relationship were fine. you gave a lot of trivias and that's nice. jung joonyoung and eric nam though! and this is completely irrelevant, but I don't like text language in apps and... you used 'tho'. that would irk me, but then you wrote about her and joonyoung's relationship and gah, I like this. giriboy. livi, I think we can be good friends. I'm sorry the review is short but your app was nicely done and I don't really have anything to say. you're accepted, but it would be nice if you altered her weight/height. once again, thanks for applying!
STATUS: accepted
hello livi, and thanks for applying! first off, lee sungkyung <3 minji is underweight, and I don't really see a reason for that. please make her shorter or bump her weight up a little bit. her personality was short, but it had the details I needed. her basics, background, and relationship were fine. you gave a lot of trivias and that's nice. jung joonyoung and eric nam though! and this is completely irrelevant, but I don't like text language in apps and... you used 'tho'. that would irk me, but then you wrote about her and joonyoung's relationship and gah, I like this. giriboy. livi, I think we can be good friends. I'm sorry the review is short but your app was nicely done and I don't really have anything to say. you're accepted, but it would be nice if you altered her weight/height. once again, thanks for applying!
STATUS: accepted
LEE SUNGKYUNG
JIN HYOSANG
OHLOVI
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