Review :)
Goodbye Baby..
I just got my review. ^^ here it is;
Foreword [Total: 18 Points]
Title: [2 Points]
I will be honest, I am not fond of titles that are exactly the same as a K-Pop song. Please work on its originality.
Poster: [No poster so clarity will be regarded instead]
Clarity: [8 Points]
The three lines were more visible than the text, it kinda distracted me but there was a simple white background and readable black text.
Understanding: [8 Points]
Even though the description was found on Google, I understood it well. I would've just personally prefered it if the author used her own words to explain the story.
Story [Total: 38 Points]
Spark: [10 Points]
To me, Woohyun was a bit too girly and I was honestly feeling monotonous most of the time. The ending was cute though, filled with regrets.
Spelling and Grammar: [3 Points]
I found it uncofortable to read for the reason that there were many mistakes in capitalization, pluralization, spelling, and punctuation.
Originality: [7 Points]
Pretty much been there done that.
Understanding: [18 Points]
I had trouble in determining who was talking and there were sudden scene changes that made it a bit hard to comprehend the current situation. Also, I had to browse back to assess the situation and I would've preferred it if the closeness of Woohyun and his sister were expounded further but that's just according to my personal preference.
Overall Points: 56/ 100
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It's kinda bad, but it at least means that i should try my best with my other ff.
Thnx Crystal Luxury Review Shop <3
here's the link to her review shop; http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/94061/
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It's kinda bad, but it at least means that i should try my best with my other ff.
Thnx Crystal Luxury Review Shop <3
here's the link to her review shop; http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/94061/
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