An Inspirational Crisis

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Jiyong has been stuck on the preperations for his new album but thankfully,his boyfriend is there to help him to get inspired again.

Foreword

Hello folks! ^^

Here is a spontaneous one-shot written by me! I was in a good mood today and had some time, besides, the idea for this had been kinde stuck in my head for quite some time and I just needed to write it out. It is nothing special or extraordinary but I still hope that you will feel joy while reading this! I tried not to be too cheesy this time keke!

As always, I am always thankful to you guys for reading, commenting and subscribing. Please know that I appreciate it a lot! <3

Hatsumomo ;)

 

 

 

 

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Ms-Hyde #1
Chapter 1: awww this is such a cute story!! i loved it! :)
t-oresama #2
Chapter 1: (cont.) not just what I mentioned before, but the way you give the story and their moments together more intimacy by saying how they're stolen moments during the near-silence of the early morning in public, and the way that you say "Jiyong had no choice" but to follow Youngbae out because Youngbae managed to persuade him (that was flipped in my story though haha). I'm just kind of having a laugh to myself about this. It's just amazing how we seem to think so alike about this lovely couple and how they're portrayed X3

One of the lines I liked most was actually Youngbae asking Jiyong if he's happy. It's such a small thing to ask but actually really big too. Especially since that's the whole idea of this story is that Youngbae wants to do whatever he can to make Jiyong happy, and since Jiyong probably hasn't been asked that much, especially when new songs are constantly demaded from him. So it warmed my heart reading a line like that. And the way you showed Youngbae in this story really warmed my heart too! From the way you have him knowing Jiyong's upset just by the subtle change of tone in his voice to the way you have him as the sage advice giver, which is actually a reoccuring theme in this story, you just make him such a stable and reliable support system that Jiyong needs and it's just fantastic. And the way you just had Jiyong sitting in Youngbae's lap taking in the sights and simply enjoying each other... my GDYB shipping heart is very full and happy :)

Your random burst of inspiration turned into a sweet and emotionally deep one-shot. Fluffy, but with a point, which was to take away some of the burden Jiyong faces and replace it with positive love. Couldn't have asked for a better purpose for fluff! Another marvelous story, my dear. Thank you for this!! ^_^
t-oresama #3
Chapter 1: So, like I said before, never feel like you shouldn't advertise your new stories to me! I seriously checked you and a couple other of my favorite fic authors' profiles before I left for vacation (because, again, I dunno how to subscribe to authors, just stories T_T), and I swear I didn't see any new stuff from you. But the next day, there it was o-0 Weird... anyway! I love how both of our one-shot winter-scaped GDYB stories were posted around the same time. That's... pretty dang cool, actually XD

So you wrote in the foreword how you just had this burst of inspiration (and free time, also important) to write this, which is funny because it's the exact opposite of the way you portrayed Jiyong XD But I like that I could tell you were inspired and wrote all of this/most of this in one sitting. A lot of my stories are not written in one sitting, so I worry that they come off as disjointed because of the time gaps, but with this story you could tell by the fluidity and pacing that you had one clear idea to write and it shows. ...Not sure if I'm making sense here, but I like the pacing is what I think I'm getting at here haha. I also really like how you started us off. You show the true artistic pains writers have (writers of music, poems, fanfictions... I could feel Jiyong's pain from the way you wrote it haha). It was very relatable, and let us see his struggle, and not just seeing him struggle, but seeing the way he puts pressure on himself. You set it up so that we see that it isn't just a creative block, but a block on multiple levels, including loneliness. I really loved that.

I'm also starting to see some parallels between our stories...
soc_lliure #4
Chapter 1: So cuteee...
jusmee #5
Chapter 1: how sweet!!
taemisol #6
Chapter 1: soooo sweeet. the dragon and his bae <3<3<3
sailoru #7
Chapter 1: This story makes me soooo jealous of their love life. I've never truly felt jealous of a story! Love the story and your writing.
BehnazYB #8
Chapter 1: OH MY GOD ITS SOOOOOOO SWEET T_T another beautiful GDYB moment. Thanks for sharing this with us.
peacelove2 #9
Chapter 1: I wish everyone has someone who knows what you need before even you do.Who is so into you. Jiyong and Youngbae are lucky to have each other.This is so sweet.Love it. Keep up the good work. Thank you.
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