Love Never Change

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TITILE : Love Never Change (From iLove You Forever)

CHARACTERS : JUNG SOOYEON JESSICA | LEE DONGHAE | LEE MIN HYE(O.C)

GERNE: ROMANCE

PREVIEW QUOTES :

"I AM JUST FOLLOWING YOU AND YET YOU ABANDONED ME?"SAID BY JESSICA

"I AM SORRY , I LOVE YOU ONCE MAYBE I'LL BE BACK TO LOVE YOU TWICE"SAID BY DONGHAE

"I HATE YOU LEE DONGHAE"

"I LOVE YOU JUNG JESSICA"

 

WHAT I OWN : I ONLY OWN THE STORYLINES BUT NOT THE CHARACTERS.PLEASE UNDERSTAND

 

CHAPTER ENDS AT : OneShot [ORIGINAL ONESHOT]

 

DESCRIPTIONS(AUTHOR): THIS IS AN ORIGINAL STORY OF HAESICA MAKE BY ME !! I DO NOT WANT TO HAVE ARGUMENTS PLEASE UNDERSTANDS.

 

OFFICIAL "iLoveYou Forever"

STORY MADE BY : ALICIALOVEEKEY

Foreword

ANNOYEONG SHAWOLSONE !! A NEW FANFIC ABOUT HAESICA XP I JUST NEED 2 FAVOURS FROM U PLEASE !!

 

PLEASE SUBSCRIBE TO THIS STORY & COMMENT SOME SUGGESTION !! THANK YOU FOR COROPPERATING WITH ME !!

 

LOVE.YOU.AliciaLoveeKey ~BlingBlingSmile~

 

Do You Know I First Time Made OneShot Story ?? If My Story Is Not Good I Apologised !!

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YooniqueDJ #1
Also, it is not good to include smiley faces or emoticons like ":D" in your story because it proves that you can not describe the character's facial emotions etc. <br />
Sorry if I sounded harsh, I just learnt from reading reviews by reviewers :)<br />
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~Cindy
YooniqueDJ #2
There is a few things you can change to make your oneshot even better (Im NOT a reviewer btw)<br />
1. Your font for your foreword is hard to read and if a review is to be made, I'm pretty sure he/she will dock marks off for the presentation. <br />
2. Your dialogue is messed up. You need to separate each line for a different speaker by using the "enter" key. <br />
3. Why is there a captital for each word? O_O I do not understand why you did that for, it is a bit annoying and that is improper. <br />
4. I also advise you to "edit" or get read over your work to see if they made sense because some of te wording and syntax etc. is wrong. <br />
<br />
I'm not offending you or anything, just want to help you improve more. Once again, I am not a reviewer, but I can still see those mistakes you made. Just hoping for a more improved writing next time :) <br />
& Also, is English your second language? <br />
Otherwise, I enjoyed your one-shot :)
aliciawhcy #3
Yeah I Knew It .... I also Abit Dun Understand LOL!! Tyvm For Reading!!
Kpop_9512 #4
I'd Advise You Not To Write In The Text You Used For The Story Because It Is A Bit Hard To Read, But Anyways, GOOD STORY!<br />
Fighting! Jjang!<br />
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(Admin - Kpopified ღ In The Facebook Page SNSD Yoona)
cocchi01 #5
Haesica <3
minstal_1 #6
so nice :)
aliciawhcy #7
SaranghaeyoMinhoOppa : Yea HaeSica FTW :D <br />
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All : Please Subsribe!!
SaranghaeyoMinhoOppa #8
Haesica FTW!!!!
SaranghaeyoMinhoOppa #9
Jessica!!!!
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