Incredible Things

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A thrilling, action-packed, and one y hell of a romantic comedy in which Math-genius-slash-babysitter Seo Iseul unfortunately falls for her mysterious employer, Kai.  A super bad single dad.   

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Suzy folds her arms and gives me one of her worried for Iseul and her stupid life choices look.  “So you were eating your just-got-fired consolation sundae in this ice-cream shop when—“

“Actually, it said Super Happy Choco Delight Sundae on the menu—”

“And when this old ahjusshi father guy came up to you and offered you a job—“

I pull my own hair in frustration.  This best friend of mine can get reaaally paranoid for my safety at times!  “YAH!!  He’s only 24, goddammit!”

“Okay, a young dude who lacks self-control and makes poor life choices offered you a job—“

I give up.  I totally give up. 

“You went and accepted this unknown guy’s offer to become, basically, a housemaid—“

I immediately raise my hand to protest.  “OBJECTION!  UH, he’s not so unknown anymore now!  And I’m not a maid, I’m a babysitter!  There’s a huge difference!”

“—Well, a babysitter for his son, who you’ve only met for about…. 30 minutes in your whole 21 years of life—“

“Jongguk, who is also very cute.”  I pipe in. 

“Whatever, for all you know he could be Stewie from Family Guy who's basically a devil child from hell.  Anyway, the guy is paying you however much you ask for because apparently, he’s a…?” Suzy looks at me expectantly.

“A… desperate father?”  I try sheepishly.

“YAH!  I’m talking about what he does!  What is it that he does anyway?”  Suzy snaps.

I blink twice and give her an innocent shrug.  Suzy sighs and mutters something to herself under her breath, probably something along the lines of ‘I cannot believe this ing idiot’ or ‘she’s gonna get herself killed’.  

“Okay, fine.”  She says, resigned.  “What do you actually know about him?”

“Well…. He has a 6-year-old son named Jongguk, who seems very cute and lovable, is apparently very busy with his I-don’t-know-yet work, and apparently making quite a lot of money…” I trail off. 

What else, Iseul, what else?!  Think!  What else do you know about the random mofo who just hired you? !  Suzy’s right!  What if he’s an ex-convict in disguise, or like, a drug dealer who’s hiding from his Russian boss or something?!  What if—

“You can start making up information now if it helps you relax.”  Suzy deadpans. 

“No!”  I immediately retort.  Ah, it.  This is what your gut is for right?  So what if I don’t know this guy?  All I know is—

“Currently, he’s my employer…” I pause, then grin.  Suzy raises an eyebrow.

“...And he’s also freaking hot.”  


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Disclaimer:  Copyright neonflowers 2015.  This story came from my head.  I was first inspired to make a mobster/action themed story by a mobster themed fic I (still) love so much which is Mobster for Rent by huntress, but apart from that this story isn't inspired by anything else.  Any similarities to other fics or stories is simply coincidental.  Plagiarism, therefore, is strictly not allowed.  That means..  DO NOT, I REPEAT, DO NOT!!  Steal the idea of this fic/storyline, since I swear upon all that's holy I thought of this one (the big plot and all the other stuff) myself and I haven't seen another babysitting-mobster crossover fic like this one here on AFF.  You can try to steal stuff but you know what they say, ripoffs are never better than the original so you know what just ditch the idea of doing that.  Do not try to plagiarize the whole thing and only change the character names too.  I set disallow text selection for a reason.  

Might start off slow but I promise things will build up as we go along.  Just skip to the later chapters (chapter 20ish is where it slowly goes down) to see if you're gonna be interested, and go back to the earlier ones if you are!

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GebehS #1
Chapter 43: I am waiting for your next chapter, author-nim!
ejacob9704 #2
pls update
Chapter 43: Authornimmm are you really won’t continue this story?:( I finished reading it and i still wish you’ll continue this in the future because THIS STORY FELT SO REAL hahaha but seriously tho, i love this story and how you can make it so nervous yet fun at the same time. Thankyou for this beautiful story!!
IT MAKES ME FEEL ALL SORTS OF THINGS. I LOVE THIS STORY. Also can i drop an appreciation for the fact that the little system of HOC you developed is extremely simple to understand, & yet adds a unique touch to the story? I hate it when there's a whole new universe of imaginary systems to understand! but this is actually pretty simple & great.
Also this Kai is such a tease, i am getting frustrated for my homegirl Seul lol. ALSO VIC'S CHARACTER! SO NEW, SO UNORTHODOX, SO UNIQUE. I LOVE HER, LOVE THIS STORY AND LOVE THE AUTHOR. I AM SO EXCITED FOR THE UPDATE
Chapter 43: I can't wait for some action scenes and a Kai coming to the rescue:33
Chapter 11: This is driving me crazy!! in which chapter does Iseul get jumped by those men out to hurt Kai? I've been trying to find it but I'm having trouble lol
Chapter 43: Oh god this was a rollercoaster up to now. I forgot it was an ongoing fic due to all the chapters xD but this is a great story
Chapter 18: I'm still in the midst of reading and can I just say your sense of humor is on point?! I really did laugh out loud at many instances and I love the way you describe everything!
Chapter 43: HAPPY NEW TEAR LOVE!! Theres too many going on in life, i hate it too. Thank you for the update, smp sekarang msh blm move on dr mantan nih HAHA. come back soon, miss you!
Chapter 43: I'm waiting for your update authornim!!! I'm so glad Iseul healing slowly, but hmmm can't wait for them getting back together, I wish nothing bad happen to Iseul or she will notice something sooner or later, Love youuur fanfic so much! and you're one of the author that give me the urge to write again, I keep wonder and imagining different situation for the next chapter ^^ here's my love for youuu pyong pyoooong <3 <3 <3