Incredible Things

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A thrilling, action-packed, and one y hell of a romantic comedy in which Math-genius-slash-babysitter Seo Iseul unfortunately falls for her mysterious employer, Kai.  A super bad single dad.   

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Foreword

Suzy folds her arms and gives me one of her worried for Iseul and her stupid life choices look.  “So you were eating your just-got-fired consolation sundae in this ice-cream shop when—“

“Actually, it said Super Happy Choco Delight Sundae on the menu—”

“And when this old ahjusshi father guy came up to you and offered you a job—“

I pull my own hair in frustration.  This best friend of mine can get reaaally paranoid for my safety at times!  “YAH!!  He’s only 24, goddammit!”

“Okay, a young dude who lacks self-control and makes poor life choices offered you a job—“

I give up.  I totally give up. 

“You went and accepted this unknown guy’s offer to become, basically, a housemaid—“

I immediately raise my hand to protest.  “OBJECTION!  UH, he’s not so unknown anymore now!  And I’m not a maid, I’m a babysitter!  There’s a huge difference!”

“—Well, a babysitter for his son, who you’ve only met for about…. 30 minutes in your whole 21 years of life—“

“Jongguk, who is also very cute.”  I pipe in. 

“Whatever, for all you know he could be Stewie from Family Guy who's basically a devil child from hell.  Anyway, the guy is paying you however much you ask for because apparently, he’s a…?” Suzy looks at me expectantly.

“A… desperate father?”  I try sheepishly.

“YAH!  I’m talking about what he does!  What is it that he does anyway?”  Suzy snaps.

I blink twice and give her an innocent shrug.  Suzy sighs and mutters something to herself under her breath, probably something along the lines of ‘I cannot believe this ing idiot’ or ‘she’s gonna get herself killed’.  

“Okay, fine.”  She says, resigned.  “What do you actually know about him?”

“Well…. He has a 6-year-old son named Jongguk, who seems very cute and lovable, is apparently very busy with his I-don’t-know-yet work, and apparently making quite a lot of money…” I trail off. 

What else, Iseul, what else?!  Think!  What else do you know about the random mofo who just hired you? !  Suzy’s right!  What if he’s an ex-convict in disguise, or like, a drug dealer who’s hiding from his Russian boss or something?!  What if—

“You can start making up information now if it helps you relax.”  Suzy deadpans. 

“No!”  I immediately retort.  Ah, it.  This is what your gut is for right?  So what if I don’t know this guy?  All I know is—

“Currently, he’s my employer…” I pause, then grin.  Suzy raises an eyebrow.

“...And he’s also freaking hot.”  


        

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Disclaimer:  Copyright neonflowers 2015.  This story came from my head.  I was first inspired to make a mobster/action themed story by a mobster themed fic I (still) love so much which is Mobster for Rent by huntress, but apart from that this story isn't inspired by anything else.  Any similarities to other fics or stories is simply coincidental.  Plagiarism, therefore, is strictly not allowed.  That means..  DO NOT, I REPEAT, DO NOT!!  Steal the idea of this fic/storyline, since I swear upon all that's holy I thought of this one (the big plot and all the other stuff) myself and I haven't seen another babysitting-mobster crossover fic like this one here on AFF.  You can try to steal stuff but you know what they say, ripoffs are never better than the original so you know what just ditch the idea of doing that.  Do not try to plagiarize the whole thing and only change the character names too.  I set disallow text selection for a reason.  


Might start off slow but I promise things will build up as we go along.  Just skip to the later chapters (chapter 20ish is where it slowly goes down) to see if you're gonna be interested, and go back to the earlier ones if you are!

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xxlovelydayxx 0 points #1
Chapter 43: Nooooo Kaiseul!!! I'm so sad they're separated. Jongguk throwing a tantrum and crying broke my heart. Poor baby doesn't even understand what's going on. I know it's already been established that Iseul's strong, but having to go through all that she did, I'm just now realizing how strong she really is. I also feel really bad for Kai, but at the same time I agree with what Jae said. It's not fair that he gets updated on her life while Iseul can't see them anymore.

Also, if that plagiarist's story isn't taken down feel free to drop us the link so we can report them. ;)
Galaxyfanfan-1
0 points #2
Chapter 43: I'm in love with this!!!!!!
kpopcassieexotic
0 points #3
Chapter 43: Hey! I'm so sorry the issue wasn't solved and there are ty people reporting you for calling out someone who did something wrong! I hope karma comes back and bites them in the twice as hard at some point. Till then, stay strong!

(also thank you for updating!)
Wuyifan_fan 0 points #4
Chapter 42: you're so strong even when this is so unfair :( I admire you so much and I hope that person will realise her wrongdoings. HWAITING !!
lee_leeya 0 points #5
Chapter 43: YOU’RE THE BEST!!!
060306 0 points #6
Chapter 43: OMG, this is hands down the best story I've read in a long time! Good job! I'll go sob in a corner quietly now.
widebluesky
0 points #7
Chapter 43: On the second thought jackson is suspicious cause he was there when the whole 'findind suzy' ordeal happened. And now at the last part the creeper finds a her after only jackson and mark meet iseul and mark drops iseul at her apartment. Smells something. And isnt this the chapter that was posted previously ?? Since after a passage it felt familliar
RinnieDuhBunny
0 points #8
Chapter 43: OMG YES I LOVE YOUUUUU, THIS IS AMAZING