Into The New World - I. Love. You. ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

Description

Jonghyun has always loved her. "Quote- We can make it through the rough times... together."  Together, both can make it though anything, as they travel into a new world.

Foreword

Oneshot based on-
SNSD'S Into the New World-
 
I want to tell you, even though the sad times have already past
Close your eyes and feel, how you affect my mind, how you attract my gaze.

Don't wait for a miracle, there's a rough road in front of us
with obstacles and future that can't be known, yet I won't change, I can't give up.

Keep your love unchanging for my wounded heart
Looking in your eyes, no words are needed, time has stopped.

I love you, just like this. The longed end of wandering.
I leave behind this world's unending sadness.
Walking the many and unknowable paths, I follow a dim light.
It's something we'll do together to the end, into the new world.

Don't wait for a miracle, there's a rough road in front of us
with obstacles and future that can't be known, yet I won't change, I can't give up.

Keep your love unchanging for my wounded heart
Looking in your eyes, no words are needed, time has stopped.

I love you, just like this. The longed end of wandering.
I leave behind this world's unending sadness.
Walking the many and unknowable paths, I follow a dim light.
It's something we'll do together to the end, into our new world.

Feeling alone in this dark dark night
Your soft breath,
This moment, warmly entwines me in your presence.
I want you to know all my tremors

I love you, just like this. The longed end of wandering.
I leave behind this world's unending sadness.
Walking the many and unknowable paths, I follow a dim light.
It's something we'll do together to the end, into our new world.

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DarkHybridx
#1
kana, I'm not trying to be mean, but in all honesty, your song fics can hardly be considered stories. Literally, almost every other line is a line from the song's lyrics, and after that, it almost seems like only a small commentary or elaboration.<br />
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Song fics, more or less, is using the lyrics of a song to enhance scenes for a certain storyline that one seems fit with the song's lyrics. They are NOT using the lyrics as nearly 50% of the text.<br />
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I'm sorry if I sound like a horrible basher, I'm sorta in a bad mood right now too...yeah, anyway, keep writing, yeah?
ScrawnyBoy101 #2
i like this.<br />
i just love snsd's into the new world.<br />
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Xoxo11
#3
Nicee One Shot :D
kakaibii #4
LOVLAY. x)<br />
-dumps a bunch of fresh ideas into the kana box- <br />
THERE YOU GO!<br />
such a sweet oneshot once again ;D<br />
kakaibii #5
:O How sweet. Update it soon!^^